Ah man! That was me when i found out there was no chapter 3.

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY! ITS FRECKIN AWSOME!

Yeah, you're not gonna finish this story are you?


Too bad, I really liked it

Gaara! *shot
hehe, you said guess? XD

next chapter please!

okay... is that kid Konohamaru or something?
oh, and is this gonna turn into a sasunaru story? just asking...
and please hurry with the story!

For the guy siting in Naruto's lap I'm taking a random guess with Kiba since he seems like someone who would do that. For couple sugjestions I have NejiXGaara, NejiXTenten, and ShikamaruXTemari.

I completely agree. I'm in love with Naruto's character. He has to the bravest, most generous, most selflessly *good* character I've ever come across. (Not counting those shoujo girls with disgusting inferiority complexes)

I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

cookies?
i love cookies!
was it sai on his lap?
..and oh, did i mention that i love your story?
you have to continue this!
i enjoy "spying sasuke'..
write soon! :)

SAI IT WAS SAI! right, right am I right?! ^0^

I have this huge cheesy grin spread across my face because of the 4th-to-last sentence "are you looking for me?" XD. So then, Naruto's noticed Sasukes...spying? Interesting, I can't wait for your update, :D. I also love the order of how things are happening, great fic, update soon!

~x~

Your story is really good. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

great ;) update soon x

i like this. Its sort of... i dont know to say it... if i say clean will that be confusing? Yes.. it is isnt it? But thats how it seems to me in my messed up head. I like it. And i also agree with your truths about people throwing in random japanese into stories... it bugs me. Cept for dobe... thats necessary. Anyway, i like Sakura in this... which is weird. Oh and you know who would be a great couple? Neji and Gaara... even though im pretty sure Neji's with Tenten... what can i say? I love Neji and Gaara together lol. Anyway, hope you update soon.

LittleCrane

About Sasuke and Sakura's encounter... to be honest, I thought Sakura was a little too friendly with Sasuke. Japanese people are very polite, and it's in Asian culture to keep one's distance, but seriously, she seemed way too nice to him to be real. =O Normally, I wouldn't have minded, but I read your end comment about why Sasuke's nice to Sakura. Well, anyway, I think the case is the complete opposite. lol

Anyway, I read your comment about not disliking the girls in Naruto. It's kinda made obvious with how you portray them. Just don't go too overboard, or else it'll seem real fake, and the girls will turn into bloody perfect Mary Sues even if that's not the intention.

Other than that, I like this fic, and I hope to read more soon. ^_^V

god i can't wait i want sasunaru *puppy eyes*

Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.