Another great chapter! Yukimura's my second favorite character now. He's on the lookout for more mysteries to be solved. I wonder if Kyo or Yukimura will find the truth first. Kyo's gentle side is new to his character but not. I really like that side of him. So where are they going now, I wonder. I'll try to be patient.

OOH! Awesome! Not at all what I expected here but very cool! Don't worry about apologizing for the late updating. I'll wait patiently for more. I love Botenmaru's character in this one, but my favorite has to Kyo. 'You have 18 minutes now'. He's very protective right now. There are stil mysteries to be solved, and I can't wait for the next twist.

This is a really cool creative take on Samurai Deeper Kyo. You have powerful and true character portrayals, but you've put them in your own story. Waiting patiently for the next parts.

it was a great story.

oh my im lovin this story..please let me know when you update..ill deffinitely be sure to come read this until the very end =]

this is so good is ther more to it. when you get the next chater up can you emilit to me because i this i my favorit one.
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I so happy that you updated! I look foreward to the rest of the story. keep up the good work!

thats it where's the rest

omg i cant wait for more but im a lot confused with yuya and the baby

Please write more soon!

Thanks for the update, needs a little work on the grammer.Update soon

O! Intrigue!

I can't wait for another Update!

Ugh... I couldn't stand that Hatori guy >:[ if I were Yuya, I would've stabbed him. Or there was always the option of Kyo pummeling him too in my mind lol ^^ please write more soon. I'd like to see more Kyo and Yuya action, but I can be patient enough :)

Please write more!Great story!