that was great. sequel?

Enjoyed this a lot. Vala is quite in character, cracking jokes whilst being mortally wounded and wanting Cam to get the others. The most touching moment is when she says "Home?" in reference to the SGC. Very nicely done!

oh you've gotta write more chappies for this one, it just begs for them, we gotta know how their dinner went...

Cam the hero in shining armor? I like! :-)

Quite a good story. I think it worked out really well.