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| dbz27 2008-01-06 ch 6,  | abuseKeep going! Cannot wait for more! |
| vegamarie 2007-12-29 ch 2, | abuseI know it's been a while since you updated, but it would be very nice if you did so. I really have enjoyed reading this story, even though it is very violent and disturbing. I just want to find out what happens to Vegeta and when he finally meets Goku. It's an original plot and I like the setting of the Civil War. So, if you haven't decided to ditch this story, please, please update when you get the chance! |
| vegamarie 2007-09-02 ch 6, | abuseOh my god, I feel so awful for Vegeta. That chapter was so intense. I'm glad it wasn't Freeza who deflowered him, but having him watch Nappa do it, how humiliating and awful. Again, there is much speculation running through my head about how Vegeta will adjust to this change in his position and what will happen when Goku finally enters the story. Please update soon. Looking forward to it, even if this story brings about the degradation of one of my favorite characters. That's what makes it so interesting. It's different and well written. |
| Dragon77 2007-09-02 ch 6, | abusePoor geta! I can't wait to read more so update soon. |
| vegamarie 2007-08-30 ch 5, | abuseExcellent chapter. This story is progressing nicely. Really, Vegeta is going to definitely be in for a shock when he finally fulfills his destiny at the whorehouse. I'm curious to find out who introduces him to the awful part of his new job. I hope it isn't Freiza. Yuck! If I could go in and sweep Vegeta out of there, I would. Please update soon. |
| Dragon77 2007-08-29 ch 5, | abusePoor Vegeta !I hope Goku shows up soon to take Vegeta away from his new life. |
| vegamarie 2007-08-20 ch 4, | abusePlease update soon. I know that Vegeta's not going to react well to becoming a whore for the master, but I want to know what he will do. Looking forward to the next segment. |
| Dragon77 2007-08-20 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON. |
| Dragon77 2007-08-15 ch 3, | abuseLoved it can't wait to read more soon update soon. |
| vegamarie 2007-08-14 ch 3, | abuseEhh, Vegeta being so shy and all about sex even though he has grown up in a whore house. Poor, noble guy. It's going to be interesting to find out what his reaction will be when he discovers what the price is he must pay for living there. And what he will do to the woman who he thinks of as a mother of sorts. |
| vegamarie 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseEh, and so the tale begins...Promises to be an interesting and unique plot twist. The Civil War was a tragic war in American History and I'm interested in seeing how you pull in elements of Dragon Ball Z into the historical context of this event. |
| Aseret Kitsune 2007-08-04 ch 2, | abuseIt is a bit slow paced, but not too bad. It's a good start, and I can't wait for more. |
| Aseret Kitsune 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseIt's an interesting start. I'm enjoying immensely so far, the details leaving some great images in my mind. |
| Dragon77 2007-08-03 ch 2, | abuseI thought it was a great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON. |
| Coral 2007-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou've catch my attention with this intro :) Hope to read more soon |