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Literary Eagle 12/23/06 . chapter 27
Aw, so much cuteness in this chapter! Oh, and happy holidays! _
AntiCensor 12/22/06 . chapter 27
The absurdity you apply to this story is very fitting I think. Since it is ridiculous from the beginning that these two would be together it is only appropriate to make them discuss things that would never happen. When we know what happens we can use the device of musing to make it so much more tragic. They might have had a house, with flowers and a dog and a plains and... and frilly curtains that may or may not turn out to be pink depending on how convincing Aeris can be with her loins.

Fun stuff, fun stuff.
Masamune's Song 12/22/06 . chapter 20
Wow, great fic! VERY well written. I LIKE that your Sephy is a little "soft." I read his thoughts when my Sephy gets too bleak. Thanks for writing. Really appreciate all the art you've put into it so far.
fooffybunny 12/22/06 . chapter 27
well first off... HAPPY BIRTHDAY HUN! It's not typical to give a "gift" to others on your b-day but I'm SO taking it anyways lol another perfect chapter as usual _ I liked the whole scenario w/ Adrean, Yuki, and Yuffie... reading that made me realize how much I really like Adrean. He's a great/funny character!

And I was on the edge of my seat at the end of the story lol I was thinking "oh crap...did she say 'yes' to him or was it her orgasm?" lmao horrible I know but that's just my paranoid brain at work... anywho, thanks so much for updating (and around x-mas time too..how thoughtful) and hope your day was special! Take care _
asga 12/21/06 . chapter 27
Oh my its so sweet Its not the end right? hehe I hope this will have Happy Ending :d Update soon ne
bleedingheart22 12/21/06 . chapter 27
i've been reading your fan fic from the very minute it came out. you got me hooked! i simply love how you developed aeris and sephiroths relationship over time. to me it almost feels real you know, like it actually happened in the game. you follow the story from the game exactly but you put your own thing to it as well.

now about the story, lately you've been scaring the heck out of me. sephiroth talks a lot about how he's in love with aeris. and its really sweet and i love it. but i noticed that aeris lacks the same kind of emotions as his. i mean i know she does have feelings for him and their relationship is not all about the sex(i hope it isnt), but im not sure if its LOVE. oh, please make her love him equally. and make it a happy ending as well ]

i'll be waiting for your next update
Noacat 12/20/06 . chapter 27
This can either end well or horribly. At this juncture I have NO which. Me? ...yeah...on the edge of my seat right now.
AlexWIERDO 12/20/06 . chapter 27
That place sounds perfect to live, chapter is amazing like usuall! And Yuki and Yuffie moment hehehe will he do the right thing? LOVE IT, LOVE IT ALL! updates in the near future pweaty pwease!
Nasia Marie 12/14/06 . chapter 26
Update some more please. I love your writing. There is too much sex for my taste, but this is a good book and that is saying something.
Figure of Six 12/10/06 . chapter 26
I just thought I'd pop in and say...

I love, love, -love- this fic! It's so very well written and by far one of my favorites.

Keep it up
Anencephaly 11/25/06 . chapter 26
Beautiful! omg, I can't believe I didnt recieve an alert on this sooner. Please post more! I'm always a fan of your work! You're such an excellent writer!
OrangeKisses 11/14/06 . chapter 18
*Hides in corner* Um... Right. Hi?

Lt. RaIQ
OrangeKisses 11/14/06 . chapter 17
Seph, you're an idiot. Mucho Stupido. *nods*

Lt. RaIQ
OrangeKisses 11/14/06 . chapter 16
Man, Seph better have an extremely good reason for leaving, or all h-ll is going to cave.

Lt. RaIQ
OrangeKisses 11/14/06 . chapter 15
He went through heck to get that rose, but how the devil did he climb up the window, naked, with out someone noticing? o-0

xD

Lt. RaIQ
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