Sepherdoodle! D

Zack's cool, he managed to reveal the jealous side of Sephiroth (and probably not for the first time) and I'd imagine that's no easy feat. Great update, and I hope we get to see some more soon.

“Does that work on cows?”

xD

Yay, a new chapter! I loved the banter in this one. Trying it on the ceiling? Wow. XD

Yays! Does my heart good to see you've written more. Such interesting character portrayal here. You do a good Seph D

It'll be awesome if you can write more again soon. I know there are others who feel the same way!

I think the brooding and grumpy Seph on the fence was a favorite passage here.

Haha, yay, you updated!

Honestly, I was so surprised to get the email telling me that this story had been updated - I'd almost given up hope! But I understand that sometimes breaks are needed (and I don't feel like I can blame any authors seeing as how I have a horrible habit of starting new fanfiction then dropping them a few chapters in). Anyhoo, I'm so glad that you're back and, even though this is a relatively short chapter compared to some others, I'm just happy that this story can move again! I can't wait to find out what you do when they get to THE SCENE. Yeah, you know which one I'm talking about! You've remained so close to the storyline (at least what we see in-game) that I've often wondered how you are going to get around the death bit. Do something creative (I'm sure you will)!

And thanks for updating!

zOMG what the bloody blistering hell? Update? UP DAYTE?

No Way!

:ehem:

Good to see you again! I know I've been way off the radar here for a long while, but I'm glad to see you're still kicking.

Man, it looks like Zack didn't die so much as he disassembled. There's bits of him in Cloud AND Seph. Of course, Seph can't complain. He does the same thing- splintering into a possessed, numbered fanbase, or splitting himself into three random silver-haired guys. Turnabout is fair play, after all.

Random thought: You know, Yuffie's dad Isn't any kind of lightweight. I went after him, like, four times before I figured out some vulnerabilities...

:Hugs: Hope studies and life are being good to you.

Been awhile - but nonetheless brilliant and charming as usual.

The dialogue of Zack and Sephiroth was rather fresh, as well as cute moments between the group back at camp. A filler chapter in some senses, but we do get information of Hojo, Yuffie's flush and some lovely scenes to chew over in your persistent perfect style.

Great work (as always), and glad to have oyu back in the world of fanfiction - God knows we've missed you.

I love those little Zack-Seph mental conversations, they're absolutely hilarious. I was really glad to see this updated, it's been far too long, can't wait for more :)

Cute chapter. Is that Zack he's talking to? I'm glad you could finally update. Keep up the great work you're doing here!

It's about time *rolls eyes*

I loved it. You made my day today with this! It's always going to be my favorite story.

Keep it coming please

Its as awesome as ever! i cant stop reading, keep it up! its great for it to be back :D

place DO OC sephiroth Romance,i love your story but i think it'll be better if you do OC love...LOVE YOU!

Ho ho ho. This was a delicious little read. I read the other version, of course, but reviews are easier here. I rather like your portrayal of our favorite silver haired killing machine. I really think you did a wonderful job in keeping with the mechanics of the world while still introducing new ideas and keeping a coherent plot.

I really enjoyed your descriptions of the Lifestream. I think you communicate what it would be like better than most.

XD Oh man. Seph's like a teen with a crush at the end here. Makes me want to cheer for him.

Oh man. XD I'm enjoying Sephiroth in this chapter. Especially that last bit with the trooper.