 AGATBfan 2008-06-13 . chapter 1Good writing, and I'm kind of happy to see Admiral Worthington dead!
The only thing is that he probably wouldn't still be into Felicity, since she's not a little kid, you know? |
 Cruel Irony 2007-08-23 . chapter 1It think it's good! |
 luneress 2007-08-06 . chapter 1*cries* oh my gosh. wow. that was powerful, tragic. wow. i love your writing. And this is another great fic. excellent job. |
 coolmarauders 2007-08-02 . chapter 1May I say that I love you? or at least your stories? They are some of the best drabbles/character studies that I have read in this fandom. They are so perfect. Every single time you keep the characters just as they are in the book, and you always add something creative and original to them.
I really liked this one -- it showed Fee's anger, not just showing how "broken" she was after being abused. Loved it. It was pretty dark, but not cheesy or cliché.
--prongs |
 inksmudged 2007-08-02 . chapter 1The writing was good, and it was an interesting idea, but I don't ever see Felicity killing her father. I think her father is too much a part of her, and it would take more than the defense of a child she hardly cares about to bring her to such a thing. I love your writing though - I always get excited when I see a new oneshot from you. :) |
 daysandweeks 2007-08-01 . chapter 1Love how you portrayed Fee.
Good job! |
 you're my Star 2007-08-01 . chapter 1Whoo, go Felicity!
This is really chilling and powerfully written. Fee was exactly as she should be; powerful and dangerous, but only when she feels weak. Loved it, quite obviously. (: |
 baby green eyes 2007-08-01 . chapter 1Wow, I like it!
Muhahahahahahaha!! She killed that bastard!!
I'm adding this to my favorites, its really good!
~BGE XD |