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| Michaela10125 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseThis short story is very thrilling you should write more but longer ones! |
| J. Dunkan 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseYou have a very unique style. It is a very rare style. I like it. Tell me, 'The Boy Who Couldn't Die,' is that a book? I am a bit confused on that point. |
| fionafiona23 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseBrowsing random book fanfictions and came upon Boy Who Couldn't Die, which is a book I saw at the bookstore today and bought - i have yet to read it, but I decided to read the fanfictions anyways. I love this paragraph so much. It's so detailed, yet definitely not overworded, like some things I've read, that are so full of repetitive words and adjectives that they get so boring to read&i hate them. but your writing has the perfect amount of adjectives and descriptions, and this is AMAZiNG. I love this part - it's creepy and gruesome.. "He winced and began to cry, for one held the staff with his friends head mounted steadily at the top." I don't know if you got that from the book, if they really did do that or something, but that's just plain creepy. But still, I love it - and I was never all for gruesome or cannibalistic stories or anything. I love this so much, because in the end, the person that the cannibals are walking towards just kills himself so they don't get to him. Perfect ending for it, "The last image that his eyes beheld was the black sky and its thunderclouds cackling as his back broke on the rocks at the base of the mountain." Again - perfectly worded, and eerie.. I love this so much! Again - LOVE your writing, and this is amazing!! |
| MusicMistress 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseWow thats actually pretty good! I liked it! |