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Kareh
2008-05-21 . chapter 14
Hey, I'm Katie's friend, btw. She recommended this fic to me a while ago but I never got round to reading it.
You're an awesome writer. I really like your style of writing - its a lot like JPs. It also amuses me how Rina's nickname is also one of my own nicknames. xD
I just spent almost two hours reading Our Genie Rina and this one too. I'm going to read the Tali's Tale just as soon as my eyes stop hurting. =P
cahawk
2008-03-19 . chapter 16
Well, now I can finally read Talis Tale! Yay! But that starts tommorow (or is it later today? Oh well)
cahawk
2008-03-19 . chapter 15
Loved the conference. Very entertaining, and even a little informative :cP
cahawk
2008-03-18 . chapter 14
Mean cliffie Bre. Just mean. Anyway, great chapter, I love how Newt manipulates, and how his nind works, and I loved the wedding. Jali isso cute! And the letter...genie government weird...oh well. I finally finnished! :c) Great story!
cahawk
2008-03-18 . chapter 13
Great chapter! And now everything has become clear! Nice explanations, and now we have the wedding! YAY!
cahawk
2008-03-15 . chapter 12
As always, gotta love the conversation :c) "DEATH TO ROUGHDIAMOND5!" :cP And Id love to see your happy dance, or your review dance. Im sure it would be vary entertaining :cP

Great chapter, and YAY! Hes dead. And now (sorry Tali *evil grin*) the world will know all of their dirty little secrets! Again, awesome job! So...moving on...
cahawk
2008-03-12 . chapter 11
Ooh! Conflict! Bad! Bad Ari 2! Play nicely with the other kids! And I love how much of an idiot Matt is when faced with tv . . . I just hope u dont see all boys that way! :cP Great job with everything! I also loved the waking up part! Priceless! XD
cahawk
2008-03-08 . chapter 10
Great chapter! I loved it! But Im not liking Ari...MAKE HIM DIE! :cP Now that thats outa the way, YAY! Angels alive! I woulda been vera vera sad if you had killed her. The fighting was great! I cant believe how much Matt could eat :cP Nice to be able to teleport anywhere you want in the world! Now...movin on
cahawk
2008-03-08 . chapter 9
I have to say, I loved the bickering between the two of them in this chapter! :c) And why do you keep on thinking filler is pointless? IT IS GOOD FOR THE STORY! Plus they really should see the parents. Seemed like a fun time :c) And Ari found them! Cant wait too see what happens! . . . oh wait, I can :cP
cahawk
2008-03-08 . chapter 8
Ya, you know I know how you felt, and Im sorry that the curses are **.

Wow, long chapter. But still, awesome job, I loved it. The wedding seemed perfect, and I loved Rina's manipulation of the whole thing. And yay! Max and Fang are married and Iggy finally proposed! :c) I love how you had to ruin :cP the perfect day though with Ari. Great plot twist! Cant wait to read more! Sound like it woulda been an awesome reception to be at! :c)
cahawk
2008-03-08 . chapter 7
B-b-but i like the idea. Why not show us ur happy dance? :cP *takes tomatoe, considers it, eats it instead, remembers that doesnt like tomatoes, spits it out*

The proposal was fine, dont worry about it, your awesome. And whats wrong with pointless (or not so pointless :cP) filler. It is good for the story, its not useless.

I would go and read the wedding, and I want to, but its 3:30 in the morning, and I should probably get some sleep, so Ill have to read it later. But Im back! :c)
cahawk
2008-03-08 . chapter 6
Dont worry, its only a couple of demands, no big. Its obvious u were content :cP Plus, love the song :cP :c)

I love the whole pony name conversation :c)And the rest of the chapter is...interesting...especially the whole Tali M-um i mean Rina :cP conversation. And YAY! They r going to propose!

Moving on...
FlamingFlie
2008-02-16 . chapter 16
... At the mention of bad stories ( cringes... I just read a horrible one... it scared the living daylights out of normal people and made me cackle insanely)...

I'm going to check out Tali's tail now!
~ Flamingflie
FlamingFlie
2008-02-16 . chapter 15
... Interesting to say the least.
~ Flamingflie
FlamingFlie
2008-02-16 . chapter 14
Wow... Staring at the computer hurts my eyes!
But I'll get to reading Tali's story sometime ( over 78,0 words does look daunting ). It was wonderful reading this!

~ Flamingflie
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