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| kimcat 2008-07-22 ch 12,  | abuseasome story!! ah the nosebleed natures way of telling you your a pervert! anyway hope to see an update soon! |
| Ce-Ce Riddle 2008-07-17 ch 12, | abuseplease update! I love this story. I loved seeing Gaara(sp) laughing. |
| Jumpingbeans480 2008-07-16 ch 12, | abuseOMG I love your story! Please update soon! |
| DarkAmber112 2008-07-15 ch 12, | abuseSorry for not reviewing your other chapters, but I just found this fic last night. And I have to say, you are brilliant! The whole Sexy Jutsu scene in this chapter had me cracking up! I think it's awesome that you let Gaara laugh, too. He needed it! I really do wish I had found this fic earlier! I love it a lot! Please be sure to update soon, I wanna know what happens! |
| StarDancer1234 2008-07-13 ch 12, | abuseYay, Kakashi's back! It's great to see that you've updated! Let's keep it coming, ne? xD |
| spiritkiller100 2008-07-11 ch 10, | abuseQuestion, why did Naruto and Gaara transform after seeing the boggart because from my look on the situation it would have increased the resistance that Naruto and Gaara have against their inner demons seeing how they wouldn't want to become what they fear the most. Other then that this is a great Naruto Harry Potter crossover that proves that following the crowd or in this case other fan fiction authors is not always the best way to get something done. That's part of the reason this fan fiction seems better than most because you including many interesting "shifts" in the HP storyline that most authors seem to ingnore in order to write a story based off of what others have done before them in the whole "Naruto must be in the tourament because he's Naruto, or he's hired by Dumbledore either with the regular rookie teams or alone as an emo ANBU". As such I hope you will keep updating this story in the future the enjoyment of myself and other viewers who enjoy reading your work. |
| zfgaryw4f5t3r45trf 2008-07-11 ch 12, anon. | abusethis is one of the best hp/naruto stories ever! |
| Flame05 2008-07-10 ch 12, | abuseHaha! Draco never stould a chance. |
| Madeline Cullen 2008-07-09 ch 11, | abuseI have a suggestion. Snape, being the idiot that he is wants to put more pressure on Neville [evil git] and tells him to do teh potion over from scratch the way he did it the first time, however, instead of it having to do with anything involving sand it might involve snakes [sasuke, oro-teme, ANKO] sake [tsunade, sakura, shizune] or anything you can possibly relate to other characters. I know it is a bit farfetched but i have no doubt that it could possibly work with your writing style. Please write more! |
| Madeline Cullen 2008-07-09 ch 12, | abuseI love the story! please continue! |
| zornoid13 2008-07-09 ch 12, | abuseThis is a very interesting story. Hope u update it again real soon. |
| Kitty-chan and Nya-chan 2008-07-07 ch 12, | abuseIt HAS been a long while,lol I love the part where gaara laughs, I can't even imagine what that would sound like, poor gaara does'nt laugh much does he? awsome as always, can't wait to see what happens next! |
| whiteinu1 2008-07-06 ch 12, | abuseKeep going ^-^ |
| A Bibliophile 2008-07-05 ch 12, | abuseI was waiting for that jutsu. Buahahahahaha! |
| A Bibliophile 2008-07-05 ch 11, | abuseI think everyone is acting a bit OOC with Naruto and Gaara at this point. They looked really evil and ATTACKED innocent people, but Hermie and Harry just try to comfort them and Ron wants to hang out with them, despite getting beat up by Naruto. |