This is a great story. Nicely done :)

This was a great story, a lot of humor in it. I enjoyed the read!

I found the epilogue pretty short, like you could've squeezed it into the last chapter. Ah, that's just me.

And that was fun. XD Good job for your first multichaptered story.

aww it was cute! great job!!

Love the epilogue. Thanks for posting this... I really like it.. Especially their promise to each other.. I really love this fic! Keep on writing and i'm looking forward to your next fic.

Erinn~

that was awesome! and it was a great ending for this chapter and it was crazy cause i was my ipod played i cant fight this feeling anymore by REO Speedwagon and it was like perfect to listen to whilst reading this chapter! anywho! great job! i loved it!

Wow. Happy for you for this fic, the epilogue, being inspired by PE class and good grades. keep it up.!

i really like the ending.. To be really honest, your words and the meaning of this whole fic hit me REAL HARD. bottling up your emotions just like Riza.. I'm like that person.. even when it comes to the person i like.. and even to the person i trust and my friends.. i guess i've learned in this fic to be more open.. not to bottle up your emotions..

Great job, really! i can't wait for the epilogue.. it was such a very good fic and you're a great writer. i'm looking forward to your next fic!

Erinn~

THAT WAS SO FUNNY! I HAD TO BITE MY HAND JUST NOT TO LAUGH TO LOUD! =D I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING MORE CHAPTERS!

Too bad this will be the second to the last...
And of course the next is the last... duh...

Anyway, thanks for writing, like ur story a lot...

PLease update or make an epilogue or something...

Thanks

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Poor Ed and his ego. Then again, it WAS chess...

Aw! *melts with Edwin and Royai fluff*

Ending this in the next chapter? aw.

The heart to heart talk was really good. At least, they both admitted their feelings for someone..

Great job on this chapter!

Erinn~

(no classes today. haha)

Loved it!

Oo, Ed even got scolded by Mustang. That just goes to show that for all their bickering, Roy really does care about Ed's wellbeing. They act like such kids sometimes. It's a good thing Riza's there to set them straight. Can't wait until the weekend for the next post, this story is quite entertaining.

Didn't like it? Are you crazy? It had the v-ball game in it, how could it not be good? Of course Falman would win the bet, he knows everything. I just never expected some of the things they said would actually happen.

Hah, that end brings back memories. Me and my friend were standing around in gym while a game of dodgeball raged around us, coming up with a story about everyone playing dodgeball. And... Falman was referee. I think that posistion just suits him. If you want to read that story, it's Dodgeball by Allayna. No, off to read the next chapter and hear about the game...