:Squeals: Oh my gosh! I love this story. I re-read it twice! *_* I love Ed/envy exspecially when Edwards unwilling. :3 I had hoped you would write more though sadly you seem to have made this a one shot? Plese inform me if you decided to take this story further. I am going to see if I can find any other stories by you that might peek my inttrest.

So no more? Damn. I was hoping Mustang would get involved or something...I don't know. This was great! Loved it!

Envy is so cruel...I love it. ^^

okay, that was scary good, really good! Cookies for you!

MORE! Please! This was wonderful and totaly did its job! Please write more!

Aw *sniffle* *cuddles Ed*

Very well written. It's hard to find stories (PWP) that actually make sense. All the same, I need to go find some humour to cheer myself up. I enjoyed (is that the right word in this situation?) reading this though ^^

Keep up the good work!

good story. can't wait for the next chapter. will ed get better soon or not?

Oh. My. God.
That was sick. Horribly, disgustingly sick. I honestly can't believe a person could write this!

And...I loved it. Surprisingly and disturbingly, I quite enjoyed this! It was just so bad...that it was good.
Nice work.
*leaves shaking her head*

I liked it, and did not regret reading it. Can you write another one, but as a RoyEd or maybe even an AlEd...I think an AlEd sounds good...can you write one? Please? Anyways, I loved it.
Lilia, the uke rapist.

WHAT?!?! WHY'D YOU BRING AL INTO THIS?!?!

This story was hot and great! I really liked it, in some sadistic kind of way ;)
The only thing i was missing was Al´s reaction to the hole thing, you mention he was crying, but i was missing a yell or a plea for his big brothers sake. But that´s just my comment. ^^ It was great anyway! Keep up the great work!! Take care!
Cya!

Woah... That's is remarkably twisted. In a good way, but still twisted.

You used both your words and imagination admirably, I'll for sure give you that much; made a huge shock factor even more profound for the reader. The spelling errors were down to a minimal, though there were some (if I were to yell at you about that, I'd have to be a huge hypocrite. Besides, I know how it is ;) ), but none were severe enough to deter from the story.

Personally, I found the character's just a tiny bit OOC (wouldn't Edward put up a fight if he fount his brother in danger? Curse and insult the person doing the endangering), but we'll just call that creative licensing, no? Besides, that's still a damn fine piece of work.

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This was pretty weird but very well written. *shudders*

Favourited ^^

*jaw drops* That was very well written, very dark and sadistic and very... good. ^^; Scary what us fans write isn't it? *faves*

-squeal- Loved it! I Love EdxEnvy soo much!

-glomps- Yummish fic!

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