you should. write more i mean

cool! n_n'

Aww that was very cute, I like that! *claps* Salty cupcakes. lol. Who makes salty cupcakes? (*cough*I probably would*cough*) XD

not bad

Something tells me you are an adorable person.

Maybe because this was an adorable story? I don't know.

Anyway, I read your other reviews, and first off I want to say kudos on not having any run-ons (except where appropriate:-)) and using proper punctuation and spelling; it's a rarity on fanfiction.

Keep writing! Tenses improves with time;-)

Oh! Great story.
I enjoyed this story very much!
Please, write more...
That´s so wonderful!

Aw, this was so cute! Absolutely yummy! ^_^ Just wished it was longer... oh, I didn't see any errors so kudos to you. :)

Ok let me start off by saying that if you are going to continue this clichéd wreck, you better start with a complete rework of your tenses and the story. The story like I said is as generic as they come with the whole high school/fluffy romance plot so that needs some seriouse plot tweaking.The way you presented the story was messed up and untidy so I must say that that needs seriouse changing as well.Otherwise it's a half-decent attempt.

I liked it, it was awesome ;]

Your tenses are really messed, which means English is probably not your first language. This story was so cliché. Try harder, instead of writing something you can finger yourself to.