Well, that's better.

Still rather strait but with some nice brush ups.

Your getting better. Haven't i said that before?

cute as it should be

I loved it!

Absolutely love it. This is what the epilogue should have been. only have 1 disagreement. I never understood why Harry would give his child Snapes name. Snape may have been a good guy in the end, but he still made Harry's life pure hell. I don't ever see him honoring him like that.

This is a little better than the previous one.

Though I still don't know what the Weasleys have against Draco's and Ginny's marriage...other than the stupid house-rivalry and old enemity. I mean, they fought together in the end! (kind of)

Anyway, good story.

that's the way it should have been...I think I'm going to print it and then I will glue it in the book as my personal epilogue, yeah that's a good idea

cute, and as it was supposed to be :]

The stories were both up to your usual good standards, but I prefer this one. Great Job! JK was so deluded!

awosme your just a great writter if I tried to write something like that It would be a disaster.

Ek. So i saw that you made another version of it, after taking a look at all your stories. It is definitely much more descriptive then the other, but either way both are my favorites, and I think its just lovely.

'I don't like redheads uncle Ron!'- Wow turning an innocent 9 year old who is a redhead in canon into a whiny jerk because you are full of Ginny-hate. She basically hates her own mother. Come on, at least make up your own little Mary Sues, this is like retconning Hermione as a Weaseley, if Harry and Hermione had kids they would be differnet than Harry and Ginny's kids. They would not be clones with brown hair.

This story fails.

This is definitely one of your best stories!

good job! If only it ended that way.. :(

So basically, you just wrote the exact same epilogue except you replaced Ginny with Hermione and Hermione with Luna? How creative...

I liked it u should add another chapter to this story...!