I couldn't believe how much I loved your story. I never reed Marauder fics cuz I'm so picky about how I imagined the story went. But this is just so good-I luv the OC's. And the relationship between Sirius and Hannah is absolutley, divinely written. My favorite Sirius/OC-officially. :)))

Not to mention you've given Remus a personality, I hardly ever see any substance to his character in fanfics. :D And he really deserves it, so-cudos again.

Please review-POR FAVOR SOON! I have to know what happens next so badily, I don't know what to do with my self!

Keep up the good work :)

I CHECK THIS PAGE EVERY FLIPPING NIGHT FOR AN UPDATE AND I AM POSITIVELY DYING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! My life is in your hands!

I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! Aaaaah! I love it! James/Lily is sooo cute. Lol. :) You're doing awesome, update sooon! :)

update soon please:)

Hello! I just found your story yesterday, and literly I couldn't stop reading it was so amazing! I am obseesed with the Marauders and Lily, so when it comes to fanfics about them, I'm pretty picky, but I absolutly LOVE this. As for how it take you a while to update, I completly understand how hard it is, I just want to make sure you contiue this because its really amazing :)Hope to see the next chapter soon ( well as soon as you can, like I said I know its hard ) :D

hey,!

i really loved this chp,! when is ur next one gonna be up?let me knwo when it is! cheers) and really good!

OMG OMG OMG OMG! Not Jamie!

I really hope she's gonna be okay!

This was a really good chapter, just couldn't stop reading it! Like WOW. I hope everything will be okay between Remus and Jamie, James and Lily and Sirius and Hannah!

Great story! I've read it before I think, but then I lost it and I can't believe I found it again ) You're a fantastic writer! I found this story while I was looking through another authors profile and I was like YAY! :) btw I saw the thing on ur profile about A Very Potter Musical - I absolutely love that! The people who came up with it are genius's. And the sequals totally awesome as well :P Don't you just love Draco in it?

Anyway enough rambling from me and back to ur story which I'm actually here for haha. Just wanted to say once again ur stories really good and I'm gonna finish reading it once i'm done with this ( i've read most of it before) xx

Well, I found a few things wrong (not making sense from what I've read in Harry Potter) but you made it as awesome! *pokes dislcaimer* Maybe you are...

Please update soon :D

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. really, it is. i love it so much. nothing to criticise, all fantastic :) its such an interesting concept to the whole lily-james story, i liked that it was so different. :) keep up the good work and please update soon! xx

Love the story! Please update soon!

OMG! My friends only just managed to tell me about this. (how could they have put it off for so long?)

THIS IS AMAZING! OMG OMG OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOONNNNNN!

PREETY PLEASE?

This story is bloody amazing!

Even the chaps near the beginning where you said that you hadn't edited!

It's so different to any Marauder fic I've read!

The way you write, I swear I was like holding my breath (espeically through this chap) it seems so real!

I thought you were gunna kill Jamie!

I was like "No! Not before her and Remus get together!"

All your OC's feel so real!

Like they should be in the real Harry Potter!

Update VERY soon...pr I may cry! lol xxxx

Ok, this chapter was AWESOME! I cannot wait for more!

I love the fact that Sirius knows about how he effects Hannah. Personally, i think he should go out of his way to make it up to her, but that is just me.

Poor Jamie and Remus. Jamie is gonna have scars and Remus will be beating himself up. You really like picking on those two, don't you?

I like the way Hannah is mad at Regan and Lily is mad at both of them. The way they are getting split apart is very realistic.

Please update soon, i love it!

I pretty much loved this chapter. I can not wait for the next one. This is one of my favorite Marauders fanfictions. Siriusly.