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Cylon One
2008-01-28
ch 12,
abuseI salute you for a great adventure that brought together two of my favorite heroes.
Cylon One
2008-01-18
ch 11,
abuseGreat chapter. I really liked how Jake and Kim were when they were thinking of each other.
I think they would make one of the coolest couples out there.
And it was cool to see Trixie and Spud again.
Cylon One
2007-11-03
ch 10,
abuseI think I know where the Long family is going to move to. Can't wait to see if I'm right. What a great chapter this was. I kid you not. Just like the others before it.
Flowerstar
2007-09-07
ch 7,
abuseI knew Jake and Kim would be in love! :D If Jake and his family moved to Middleton, that means he'll have to leave his school, not to mention his best friends, even his Grandpa and Fu Dog! :O Not to mention, he won't be able to protect magical creatures anymore from bad guys and have anymore exciting adventures. On the bright side, he'll be away from Rotwood and he'll never get the chance to expose Jake to the whole world, not to mention he won't have to put up with Brad Morton and fight evil villians and magical creatures. It's kinda cute that Jake and Kim are sharing a romantic moment together but I really prefer the romance of official couples like Jake x Rose and Mario x Peach. Man, it's very awkward that they are both blushing. O_o But in a good way. :) Er... shouldn't Jake transform into his dragon form and fly home instead of running in the rain or Kim riding on Jake, flying through the street? I'm glad that Kim's mum lets her stay with Jake which means there will be more chapters to come. :D Update soon! ^_^ By the way, unfortunately for you, even though this is an enjoyable story, I won't add it to my favs 'cause I'm not into the Jake x Kim couple, no offense. Like I said before, I'm more into official couples.
Flowerstar
2007-08-19
ch 5,
abuseAwesome plan that Jake thought of but very clever. The battle is pretty short, no offense. Next time there is a battle between Jake, Kim and the Dark Dragon, can you make it a little bit longer? I'm glad Kim is gonna help Jake and Gramps in the battle against the Dark D. She's a pretty useful ally and it's very nice of Jake worrying about Kim getting hurt. Whoa! Kim is extremely good at going against loads of goons! :O I'm glad that Kim would never join the evil dragon. :) Uh-oh! Kim, Jake and Lao Shi got defeated by the Dark D and his cronies but I'm glad that he gone, for now. Nice work on this chapter and please continue! ^_^
Flowerstar
2007-08-19
ch 6,
abuseIt's pretty nice of Jake helping his gramps and Kim to their feet after the battle. I'm glad that Kim is gonna stay with Jake until they defeated the Dark Dragon. :) Kim would be a great help to Jake and his grandfather for staying! ^_^ Oh... Kim's blushing! I knew there is something going on between the two! I love the POVs switching between the couple! :) Let me guess, in the next chapter Jake is gonna tell her how he feels about her? If Ron sees them in love, what would he'll do?
Cylon One
2007-08-18
ch 6,
abuseVery nice. Very good work. I truly liked the POV's that went on for both Kim and Jake about each other. Can't wait 'til they both admit what they're feeling for each other.
Cylon One
2007-08-18
ch 5,
abuseAwesome. Very awesome. I loved the action.
Flowerstar
2007-08-17
ch 4,
abuseI guess Jake knows how to play Chinese Checkers and is good at playing it 'cause he's Chinese. I've heard of Chinese Checkers but I've never played it before. Man, the entire Long family is pretty nice around Kim. :) Gee, Jakey's pretty nice to Kim just like when he's nice to Rose. But I have a feeling that they both may develop a romantic relationship. Lol, Jake's comment about if Gramps kept on pacing that he'll go right through the floor... more like, going through the door! XD Um... why is the Dark Dragon is having men wearing black clothes and wearing black ski masks instead of the Shades, his usual lackies? Uh-oh! The Dark D is back to cause havoc! But I'm sure that the Am-Drag and Kim will save the day! ^_^ Please continue! :D
Flowerstar
2007-08-17
ch 3,
abuseI haven't reviewed this story for a while. I thought there was something wrong with the site but actually something's wrong with AOL. Whenever I want to submit a review or click on a link, a big window pops up. It then turns blue and I tried to close it but it was no use, so I gotta reboot the laptop. Man, my laptop is getting weirder and weirder by the second. I'm glad that Kim and Jake finally found Ron and Kim was accepting Jakey just like Trixie and Spud. It's a nice chapter of Kim meeting the Long family, except for Jake's dad. By the way, I think AOL hates me. :( Update soon!
Cylon One
2007-08-06
ch 4,
abuseAnother very good chapter to a very good telling of what's currently going on during this encounter between two great heroes.
Cylon One
2007-08-03
ch 3,
abuseA very nice "meet the family of Jake's after learning Ron's okay" scene. Wonder what Kim will think of Jake's dad when she meets him. I think I can guess the possible reason for Kim not wanting to leave NYC. It has to do with a certain protector of magical creatures. Wink wink, nudge nudge. Looking forward to next chapter and those that follow.
Cylon One
2007-08-02
ch 2,
abuseNice meeting of the heroes. Wouldn't it be somethng if what Lao Shi sensed happened to be true? Maybe it is. For Jake at least. We are around the time that Kim and Ron are dating, right? Speaking of Ron, where is he? Looking forward to the update.
Cylon One
2007-08-02
ch 1,
abuseThis seems good. Were Kim and Ron on a private flight? Any chance we'll learn who those masked guys were? I think I'm going to like this one. A cool sounding crossover with Kim Possible and American Dragon. Is Jake looking like he did originally or the new look with the more serpentine dragon form?
Flowerstar
2007-08-02
ch 2,
abuseMan, that was a very fast update! :O I think I sensed the same thing, Jake might have a crush on Kim Possible but that's impossible! She already have a boyfriend. Wait a sec! If Kim's in New York, then where's Ron? Update soon and if you'll excuse me, I gotta work on my crossover.
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