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timme
2008-08-23
ch 13, anon.
abusenice fic. but i don't believe bonding and claiming is a purely fanon concept. maybe not in yyk, i don't remember exactly, but it's definately there.
Leikaru
2007-11-12
ch 13,
abuseoh kurama... You should definitely continue! How? I don't care.
kittyfoxy
2007-11-10
ch 13,
abuseI like the last line! It's a fun conversation between Kurama and Mukuro. Since this is titled with '13 drabbles',then I think you should post it on a separate set.

Big bonus points?I'm going to read the language of flower after this...
Kokoro Sabishii
2007-11-10
ch 13,
abuseO.o wow. Stick me in a box and label me impressed. You write beautifully, it gives me goosebumps.
Hearts!
Kokoro ^_^
UpperClassK9
2007-11-10
ch 13,
abuseEmm... Related to The Language of Flowers? I would say, maybe chapter 19, "A Matter of Diplomacy". It's a conversation between Mukuro and Kurama, after all.
ladyasile
2007-11-09
ch 13,
abusethirteen more?! are you crazy? post them!! post them! :-)

i can't believe it's over! well, i loved the ending... it made me smile so much and it got rid of my fever for now! cool, thanks for that! a thirteen drabbles were amazing!

:-)
PsychoLeopard
2007-11-09
ch 13,
abuseLike all your work, I loved this drabble too, subtle though it is. I admit I had to cheat on the Language of Flowers reference. Nicely tied in though, once I found it. Please do post the next set, though perhaps change the title or make it a different story first. It's your choice, of course. Bravo and all of that.
ss-dragon-lady
2007-11-09
ch 13,
abuseWonderful set of oneshots. I loved them and can't wait for the next set. I think you should put the next set in a new story, or the title will be off. I know The language of flowers reference. :D

You’re going to tell me about this someday, you know, Hiei,’ he said finally, wearily amused, ‘and I’ll finally get to hit you for doing this, you insufferable little idiot.’

That's the reference!!

In the language of flowers. It's chapter 11 that it happened in. Kurama did get to hit him and he did it twice, calling Hiei a few choice names. :D ^_^
Anna Jaganshi
2007-11-09
ch 13,
abuseI couldn't begin to guess. I can't look into things like that so well. ^^' I think either way is fine. Whatever's easier, I guess. ;)

'Insufferable little idiot'. xD That was to silly. I can just hear him say it, too. Haha. And I think I actually got that moth to the flame thing. Amazing... if I actually did, anyway. It could go both ways. :3 But yay, loved it!
Everqueen
2007-11-09
ch 13,
abuseI'm sad to see this end, but I look forward to another set, this last one was really good. I have been reading Language of Flowers, but I didn't catch the hint to it. Sorry!
KyoHana
2007-11-09
ch 13,
abuseFrom beginning to end, these were nothing short of FANTASTIC! They were beautifully, and at times poignantly, written, but I have to admit, this last is my favorite!
vetgirl1293
2007-11-09
ch 13,
abuseThat was fantastic! I think you should do another set of 13 in a different story or just re-title this one 26 drabbles.

I think I caught the reference:

"‘You’re going to tell me about this someday, you know, Hiei,’ he said finally, wearily amused, ‘and I’ll finally get to hit you for doing this, you insufferable little idiot.’"

The Part about hitting, right? I remember reading that in The Language of Flowers, speaking of which I should probably catch up to that story...
Blossomwitch
2007-11-09
ch 13,
abuseOh, love this. I get a kick out of Mukuro and Kurama casually talking about Hiei behind his back, and that Hiei didn't even know Kurama came, and the concept that they're bonded without Hiei being able to admit it, and *especially* the last line.

Yay, more drabbles!
Azamiko
2007-11-09
ch 13,
abuseI say continue posting here. It's easier on us, I think, and you. *sniff* I can't find the reference, even though I read The Language of Flowers...I vaguely recall something about Hiei's heart stopping, but was that in the fic, or in the show...?
Azamiko
2007-11-04
ch 12,
abuse^_^
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