I really like the angst genre a lot. It's very imposing, and more efficacious than any other genre. I liked the monologue aspect of it. I like how Sendoh so vehemently tries to deny that Rukawa means nothing to him. Very nice.
I beseech you to continue writing for the Slam Dunk category!!

Such a wonderful story!! I really loved how you portrayed Sendoh’s character… joking around but hurting inside… it’s SO Sendoh!!

Excellent writing, beautiful characterization… the angst is so painful but so sweet at the same time… I’m thrilled with this story…

Thank you so much for share it with us.

man, you left this off with a lot of potential. can we have koshino or someone grab Sendoh by both arms and tell him straight in the eye, "Sendoh, you. are. in. love."?

then let's have sendoh run straight to the basketball court and declare his love for rukawa in the middle of a match. /snicker/

aki, i hate you. this fic hurts! and as always, you did a good job! you light up my senru spirit again. i just wish i had the time to make something up and kick start meltwater. i've been very busy! but back the fic, i love it. make some more! love, me.

that's just so cute and sweet! makes my heart flutter! nicely done!

Aki! ^0^ waah! this is so cute! Im so busy at work- *wails* I wish I could dropped by and post something in the ML but then, my work is eating me alive...-_-

anyway, i miss senru so much na...


~jam

sendoh in denial?

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HAHA.

Nice try convincing ANYONE, Sendoh.

I loved the way you portrayed Sendoh's longing for Rukawa. An admittance of feelings, through the denial of them. Ironic and yet sweet. Stupid Sendoh, trying to convince himself that he feels nothing for Rukawa, when it is so blatantly obvious that he does.