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| Reviews for Logan's Revenge |
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   Goddess of Mischief x passion 2/10/13 . chapter 1L O F$ & L. "Tarantula!" |
| KAYCI 2/25/08 . chapter 1 LMAO! THAT WAS HILARIOUS NOW THAT I RE-READ IT. WE DID A GOOD JOB. |
| Jennifer 2/25/08 . chapter 1 TARANTULA! LMAO! GREAT JOB ON THAT ONE! |
| RAW 10/28/07 . chapter 1 LOL! That was real good kiddo! I loved that! |
| RogueOnFire 8/1/07 . chapter 1 Okay. Still funny here, but I saw a major writing flaw. You switched tenses by saying "Logan pulled on his shirt" or something like that, instead of saying "I pulled on my shirt" in the scene where Bobby enters the room while Logan's talking with Rogue. And it shoulda been the toilet seat, not the door, kay? It's funnier, more awful, all that. ROF |
