I liked this a lot! Good insight into the characters, you gave them depth!

wooow amazing and just wow

Wow, I like that. How you can explain it all so simply with background for it. Nice 8D

PT

I love this one too! More than the last, I think.

Again, you capture emotion very well in such short stories, I'm impressed.

Sally

MAN, that was beautiful! Sad and beautiful!

Oh, wow, this was wonderful.

A lovely, deeper insight into three complex characters.

Cause, let's face it, while they were just the baddies (barr Katie), with their competition driven parents and young loss, that would've screwed them up a lot. And that came across perfectly in your fic.

Nice to see a deeper fic from a movie, that is hilarious, but not very deep. Well done.