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| Kite of the Azure Flames 2008-02-16 ch 6,  | abuseThe story is getting is more and more interesting lets see what happens next chapter, cheers! ^^ |
| AxBrokenxRose 2008-02-13 ch 6, | abuseFinally Haseo lets Pi catch onto his feelings. I wonder what the offer is... I hope it spares Haseo's life! Update soon Nashi! I really love this story! |
| Kite of the Azure Flames 2007-12-08 ch 5, | abuseGood chapter i liked it a lot, hope you can uodate sooner. ^^ |
| Jack-O-Blades 2007-11-27 ch 5, anon. | abuseyeah, sorry i didnt have time to log in. that chapter gave me goose bumps! I wonder what the whole thing with endrance was though...hmm mabey ill find out in the next chapter. ~Jack~ P.S. no that is not my real name, just thought i'd clear that up. |
| ZombieZapper101 2007-11-27 ch 5, | abuseNice Chapter! ZZ101 |
| AxBrokenxRose 2007-11-27 ch 4, | abuseLovely chapter, though Haseo still seems a little reluctant to act on his feelings. Pretty piece! Update as soon as you're able to, Becca-chan. |
| ZombieZapper101 2007-11-22 ch 4, | abuseThis is a good chapter!! please continue! Happy Thanksgiving! Zombiezapper 101 |
| Jack The Riddler 2007-10-30 ch 4, | abusecome on, haseo is out of character...then again, when is this set? if its the first one, your right on the money. if its the second or third .HACK//G.U. you are way off. other than Haseo being a bit OOC i love it. |
| Jack The Riddler 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abusethis is prety good, you should get someone to help you with grammar and that such though. please continue with this story soon. |
| DeepThoughtsX 2007-09-30 ch 3, | abusekawaii... They would make such a cute couple... ah, I look forward to the next chapter! |
| AxBrokenxRose 2007-09-30 ch 3, | abuseAwesome. Though Haseo's being a total asshole! Gr... Wonder what's got him so pissed? I'm interested. Write more. |
| AxBrokenxRose 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWow becca-san! This was fantastic! I was totally captivated... and the writing was very detailed and... it was just very gripping. I laughed at that last bit lol. Awesome story! I am so glad you posted this! loff ya! e/e |
| DeepThoughtsX 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseGood Start, like the pairing. Open beginning, leaving you wondering what is going to happen next. I like it, good job, update soon, please! |
| Silabus' Taco 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abusethis is going to be interesting. I don't nit pick on grammer, its the ideas that draw me in. however, Please PLEASE change the title. the rouge? lmao!! *cries*, that's hilarious! |
| dark drow 2007-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting start to an interesting fic, i cant wait to see more. please update when you can :P |