Wow, powerful story. You did a great job, poor Sammy, poor Dean. Love when the brothers are there for each other, their love and strength are amazing.

Thanks for a great read, can't wait to read more of your fics!!

Blessings,

Wow, that was really something. Haven't read one that riveting or disturbing in a long time. It's good to see the brothers distanced every once in a while, not constantly wanting each other around like a lot of people write them. That's probably not the kind of comment you would want to hear, but hey, thanks for putting the effort into writing such a great fic!

Loved it! It's very good and well written. Keep it up!

... Wow. You know, I kind of define crack!fic in my head as something with a cute but totally unbelievable premise, that makes no attempt at being very believable.

But this! THIS is believable. Going along every part with meaningful detail, showing us how it could be - yeah, that's believable, all right. ;) Anyway, I really enjoyed this - some parts of it were horrific, but the characterization shown through, the boys' strength shone through. Oddly enough, it really made me think about just how strong they are, dealing with all the crap they do and still going on. Your characterization fits in with my feeling of the show seamlessly.

Really well done fic. Thank you for writing!

Mean.. really mean one!! And there I went and complained about Limp!Sam.. wasn't even near the anguish over the whole Hurt!Dean fraction, eh?? Those were one hell of an unhappy puppy, I mean, vicious creatures, but I wouldn't have expected it to turn out like that. anyway the description of the emotional turmoil in the aftermath really got me!!
Cat

PERFECT. Loved it! ^_^

Wow. You dreamed this? That's seriously disturbing. And the whole demon pregnancy thing also took some getting used to. And Post Patrum Depression? I would NEVER have seen that coming. But it was a really good fic. I loved the way you portrayed the brothers' relationship. You write really well.

Well I was lucky enough to be able to read this all in one go, having found it so late, and it was awesome!!
Loved the angst - am a sucker for hurt Dean and protective Sammy and you wrote both beautifully.
Great story - well done!
lb.

First, let me say...God, I'm glad this is over...what a ride.

I really need to go back and read in it all at one sitting, but I totally enjoyed this...even the really hard parts to read. I think more than the actual injury and surgery, the depression that Dean suffered and the confusion as to the reason for that emotion was the hardest thing to read. He...and Sam...were at such a loss.

Awesome ending. It felt right...like Dean needed to know that he was still 'Dean' still a hunter in order to move forward.

I was in Canada when this last part was posted and have been looking for it for 2 days after deleting the original notification from my email. It would have helped a lot if I could accurately spelled Eviscerated (and yes, I am looking at the title as I type). LOL

Again, I hated to see it end, but man what a ride.

Phyllis

Wonderful! I'm glad you decided to sort those boys out and leave them getting on with their hunting. I liked the vivid description of the fight at the beginning of the chapter - I was wincing along with Sam and Jim when they saw that Dean had ripped his incision. Ouch!

Great fic - I really enjoyed reading.

What a gigantic, imaginary and well-written story! Your descriptions were first-rate and I so suffered with Sammy and Dean while reading this fic like in a trance. Honestly, I was so caught up in the story, I just couldn't stop before I had read the end. This was an unending rollercoaster of emotions, and sometimes I thought I might lose it right along with the brothers.

Thank you for writing this magnificent fic!

Hi

Its amazing how wrong first impressions can be sometimes. When I first discovered the premise of this story would be Dean being impregnated with demon spawn, admittedly I was a little sceptical as it seemed so farfetched.

However you have turned hid concept into an original story that I thoroughly enjoyed right down to the post partum (or as us Brits call it - post natal) depression.

I do not like the concept of Wincest, I personally believe it is a genre that undervalues and tarnishes the sibling relationship the Winchester brothers share. You however captured that bond and unconditional love just as it should be. I especially enjoyed the comfort that the brothers found in one another especially the physical reassurances coming from Dean in this final chapter, getting Sam to touch his scar to prove he was truly going to be ok.

Well thought out and well written story

Thanks

Sue x

REally enjoying the story so far. An imaginative approach to MPreg, not a plot device I normally read but this is a god one. Sounds like Dean is having post-partem depression-- or is it something (dare I say it) supernatural? We'll see!

I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. Loved the original (if not off-beat) premise. And Kripke has nothing on you where gore is concerned ;).

It is evident that you put some research into the surgery/recovery/depression scenes. Very well done. I liked the way you wrote both boys realistically - Dean's pain and depression, Sam's fear, and both boys' long road to recovery.

Thanks for sharing this extremely creative story with us.

It is so sad to see your wonderful story come to an end. Thank you for 6 wonderful storytelling chapters. You really did a completely different story, but stayed true to the boys' personalities. I can't wait to see what you will come up with next. LOL. Until that time, take care and Happy Writing!