 pockybandits89 2009-08-22 . chapter 1hahaha this was funny |
 hungrytiger11 2009-08-05 . chapter 1Cute (Though for Hinata's sake I hope there's nothing like that going on.)
And the Hyuuga/Uzumaki kid might have taken the Hyuuga name becasue Hinata is heir. In Japan, it is not always the wife taking the husband's name. I think its depends on which family is greater or on issues like heirs and inheritance. Uzumaki is likely not a very great family/clan... |
 moor 2009-03-29 . chapter 1XD Hubby thought I'd lost it when it came to the three-some line.
Couldn't stop laughing, this was hilarious! |
 madaraxsharingan 2009-01-12 . chapter 1WTF-are-you-writing-slash-smoking?
anywho, that was random but oh their interactions are so funny!
and the uchiha brat is so like saucy! ahahah im a hate-girl =D great work! |
 AGENT Kuma-chan 2008-08-29 . chapter 1*giggles* Wow, this is rather different than the other three stories from you I've read. The style is really changed between them.
(I prefer the other ones, but this one is still nice in its own ways).
I wonder, what shall they see on the weekends? |
 SunnyHinata 2008-05-04 . chapter 1Man, awesome story. and even though it's not part of it, your author's note cracks me up.:D |
 animesweetie 2008-04-30 . chapter 1 At first I didn't get it. The Uchiha heir and the Hyuuga heir are KIDS. Haha, makes sense now. The end is some nice Team 7 love =] |
 Sienna Maiu 2008-04-15 . chapter 1I'm sorry, but I must giggle now;
"teehee!"
*cough* well then, that being done...
:P
It took me a little bit (and some rereading) to figure out just what was going on with that Hyuuga kid, but then again Hinata would technically being the head of the clan need to have children of the same name. It simply *wouldn't* do to have the next head of the clan not be a Hyuga XD (on top of which is the fact that Naruto himself has his mother's name... maybe he's just continuing the tradition? :P) |
 Wolfie559933 2008-02-17 . chapter 1WTF are you writing commencing.
Well, not really. Cause I am ADDICTED TO CRACK (not literally, thankfully) and crack is the most luvliest thing that whatever God I don't believe in gave to the earth.
Yet unfortunately, I can't review crack. Which makes me very sad. :( Just know that I love it and that I still bow to you.
~Wolfie |
 Ribs On The Run 2007-10-28 . chapter 1Oh. I thought it was Neji and Sasuke with Sai at first... and so the whole coversation was a tad bit too disturbing and very, very confusing.
But interesting enough. Sort of cute. |
 the tomato 2007-08-27 . chapter 1hah this 1 made me almost rupture my spleen! awsome do somthing else like this |
 les-liaisons-dangereuses 2007-08-27 . chapter 1Hmm, Sai is corrupting little minds lol |
 une see 2007-08-14 . chapter 1I know what Kakashi's thinking here. He wants to get in on some Team 7 ACTION. After all, it is his team. You would think they would include him in any threesomes they might be having, although technically that would make it a foursome, but no one cares about technicalities. Except pedants. And they're just crazy. (Plus, Kakashi's got the moves, if you know what I mean. He could potentially add a lot to the...McLovin'.)
But seriously. Sai with the corrupting of cute (SO CUTE) little kids makes for BAD SAI BAD BAD SAI. *shakes head*
Meanwhile, crack is fun. Crack is mucho fun, just like Spanglish is. (It's not crack! It's not crack! *wishes* It's totally canon. TOTALLY CANON.) |
 I Heart Edward Cullen 2007-08-14 . chapter 1Oh, I'm so sorry that more people didn't review. Or intelligent ones. And that 50% of your reviews was a nonsensical and nongrammatical rant about nothing in particular. So I took pity on you because your such an excellent writer and I LOVE your SC work and was a shadow reader on there and thought I'd leave you something nice here. XD Hot samurai love indeed. I |
 jambajuicelvr21 2007-08-03 . chapter 1lol wtf are u writing i didnt get nething till like the very end i was like sai, sasukue wat the hell, neji's here oh wtf kakashi omfg naruto and sakura wtf omg wat the hell was going on, i can't believe i read this whole damn thing lol |