MORE! MORE! MORE! this story is awesome so far! can't wait for the next chapter.

GREAT!...i can't wait to read more...

Heck if Naruto ended up with Sakura after all those years of enduring her torturing him and treating him like he was beneath the shit buried in the ground beneath her feet, then she ended up dead at Orochimaru's hands while he used Sasuke's body, then I would join the fox in laughing my ass off!

No good ever comes from being near the pink haired bitch, no good at all. If she never made Naruto make the promise to bring Sasuke back all those years ago, the Uchiha would be dead, than all the other enemies of Konoha would die, and Naruto would have lived happily as Rokudaime with someone much better, like Tenten, or Shizune, or Ayame, or Ino or Hanabi. Yea!

Anyway, things are turning out okay so far, but the only pairing I can see happening is, well, an OC, because no one else is there. No one is born yet except Tsunade and she is 7 while Naruto is 18. Creepy! Pedophile!

Hope to see more soon.

I don't remember actually ever reading a naruto mentor's or parents orochimaru before but it's a very intersting premise. It doesn't look like you're going to update it though, which is disappointing because it was a very good start. When Naruto is a kage, some authors try to underpower him so he doesn't seem 'overpowered' but naruto is a kage and its good to see not just an appropriate level of power but also skill. If you ever continue this, that would be great because I'd really like to see how Naruto meets Orochimaru and why he wouldn't just kill him on sight :D

Can you update this any time soon ? Love it so far !

This plot has a lot of potential... liked it a lot so far.

holey crap this is fucking genius i have never ever even heard of a story like this (and by that i mean the naruto will raise orochimaru)

please wright more 4 it

or else i will find u

Interesting story. Hope you update! xD

i like it please continue

UPDATEE SOON PLEASEE !

Dammit man:(. So many good story's but they just stopped:'(

I've just started the story, so I've only gotten past the first chapter and it's really good! But I think you should let Naruto be with Sakura or else it's just plain sad. If it's supposed to be a sad story then I can understand but otherwise I think Naruto could fix that right? But besides that awesome story!

Kyuubi really needs to see a psychiatrist I mean seriously (crazy man-fox) I would laugh if Naruto made his own psychiatrist in his head.

a baby with a hourglass mallet?

ive read weirdere things. but a amusing plotdevice none the less.

Naruto found it nessesery to chain up the kyuubi with aditional seals and torture devices? makes sence, are they also the reason for its apparent dispowerment? or is that the original seals work of giving the demons power to its host? may never know and it holds little importance.

(this is basicly random quistions that poped up in my head as i read it, but the important knowlage will problerly come with aditional chapters, i will be looking forward to them.

hey great start! keep writing!