I was wondering when Alec was going to go after Vane, Well done! =D I love Alec when he's all protective of Max =D

what if Alec did the love bite with one of the other single ladies he's been with (any X5?)

otherwise, Awesome!

Sparring plus them hooking up...AWESOME! I love Max & Alec, nice work! =D

Wow this Vane guy is one bad dude in this chapter. I love the use of S.I.N.G. from 'Miss Congeniality', it's good to know that it works against transgenics too (LOL)

IDK if I reviewed this already. I've read it so many times. It's that good! I feel like you have all the characters down and it's just so captivating. I just love it!

beutifull amazing story i loved very much

love it!

that was awesome! liked the development of their relationship, and territorial alec is all kinds of hot. of course emotionally vulnerable alec is even hotter. :)

Awesome story
I think Max and Alec make a great couple.

SQUE :]

i'm way late finding this but i had to tell you i loved it

So maybe I haven't read this... but I'm incredibly happy I did.

Hehe, I loved that... this is fantastic. So sweet... if I were the type of girl to make the "oohs" and "awws" I'd probably doing that about now.

At least I think I've read this... you know I'm probably spending more time fighting myself on this than paying attention :P Not that this should be insulting... I really enjoy... I mean how could I not? I guess maybe I could just be seeing similarities... unless you have a raising hell account... or something... haha... I'm dwelling... this is very good!

I have read this... probably on another site? Must have... I can read it again though... it's just that good :P

I think I may have read this before... or maybe not... I feel as though I may have. All is well... I forget the direction if I have... nice beginning to this one... quite captivating.