That was amazing. =D That seriously made my day, it was well written and the idea was so . . . god.

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Aigh! I love it! Need another chapter! This is healing my soul! =)

oh wow...I love it! yay!

By saying this I feel incredibly shallow and cannon however, I have no idea what that was about. It started out about Severus, I believe, but then I lost it. I have no idea what this is about or anything. I would criticize or compliment if I knew what I was commenting on. Sorry, give a better forewarn in the AU or summary.

Normally I prefer the more serious ones, but I like the humour of this /:-) and I like how you made Lily assertive. She struck me, from what little they have of her in the books, as a rather firey girl, so it always feels wrong to me when she's made all sweet and demure in fanfics. There are a few technical bits that could use tweaking, but nothing a good Beta Reader couldn't help with. Aside from that, the only suggestions I could make are: if they're both American in this AU, it might be good for him to note the difference in accent (probably that'd add a bit more to his confusion, too, lol) and his lines when he speaks to her might use a little tweaking. They don't quite sound like him. :-?
Really, I think you could probably expand this into something more than a one-shot, if you wanted to... Though it'd be even more fun if something happened to make him really know that he /was/ Snape and this was his second chance... /;-)

Sherman? You called him Sherman? I just can't see Snape as Sherman. Is anyone called Sherman any more?

Neat idea otherwise.

I felt the dialogue to be believable - although scared/confused!Snape is new to me, compared the belligerent!Snape I'm used to.

I really liked the Lily/Snape interactions - and the way she seems to take the lead over him.

Only thing I have to nitpick about was first of all the length - but considering what you did, it's only right that it should be a one-shot. However, the second crit (and yet, praise) I can give is that you seem to take the idea too lightly... (and yet, praiseworthy, since, after all, it seems like a rather post-modern, Neil Gaiman kind of idea. ;P)

I actually wished it was more -serious- in that it WAS Severus in another AU confuddled by a muggle world/convention. lol. but that's just me wanting sadistic satisfaction. lol.

At any rate, i hope you write more!
Ja!

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I thought that was really good!I love Snape and was gutted when he died but I was really happy Jo included Lily/Sev in DH.That fic was put together nicely and I love that quote "we'll kick the Slytherin out of you", must use it sometime.

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