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Captain Deadpool
2008-10-06
ch 15,
abuseSorry I didn't get around to reviewing this sooner, something came up. I like it. The villains, to me, are just as interesting as the heroes. Electro is also a personal favorite.

As for my comments on your X-Men story, I just tell people what I think. It's unlikely that I'll like everything you do, but that doesn't mean I'll give up on it when I don't. I'm still on board. Just don't expect me to tell you that I like something when I don't.
Vigatus
2008-10-04
ch 15,
abuseCool chapter. I was hopeng for more of a fight between the Red Skull and the Green Goblin but it is still good. I am surprised Cap did not radio for reinforcements first.
Phygmalion
2008-10-01
ch 15, anon.
abuseOoh! Cliffhanger!
Well, good as always, although the origin stories of the various supervillians and the basic plot of this chapter seemed rushed.
I'm really looking forward to the next edition. Great job!
Vigatus
2008-09-03
ch 14,
abuseThat was a great chapter. Very well written. I am eagerly looking forward to the next one.
Phygmalion
2008-09-01
ch 14, anon.
abuseFinally! A superhero team that is pro-active and not reactive! Keep up the good work.
Captain Deadpool
2008-08-31
ch 14,
abuseGroundbreaking work as ussual. I swear, every time I think you can't get any better, you surprise me. This chapter must have been a pain to write, too.
Vigatus
2008-08-08
ch 13,
abuseSounds like a great team line-up. I was a little disappointed that Logan or Professor X didn't join. However I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Spidey3000
2008-08-01
ch 13,
abuseYAYZ! The Avengers are back, and better than before! And Thor might just gaim some of his power back as well, though that doesn't seem as likely. Update soon!
Phygmalion
2008-07-31
ch 13, anon.
abuseWow. Mole Man, Sub-Mariner, Human Torch, Daredevil... Quite the line-up you've got here. This story is shaping up very nicely. Keep up the great work!
Will Ghost Rider ever show up? Just wondering.
Also, perhaps the X-Men could act as a kind of reserve Avengers?
Captain Deadpool
2008-07-31
ch 13,
abuseI was very impressed with this chapter. Some of the people Iron Man and Dr. Strange tried to recruit were unexpected.

In other news, guess who's making and appearance in the Hulk vs. Wolverine animated movie? Deadpool!
Scottenkainen
2008-07-25
ch 1,
abuseA nice start! I guess Alan is the character we're going to see your version of Marvel through, ala Phil Sheldon in Marvels? You won me over with your excellent understanding of Dr. Doom. You write his dialog better than any fanfiction writer I've seen yet.
Vigatus
2008-07-04
ch 12,
abuseCool chapter. I like how you have change the characters so that they are less two dimensional. I am looking forward to ch. 13.
Captain Deadpool
2008-07-01
ch 12,
abuseI tell ya, when I need my superhero fix, there's simply no one else to turn to.

Personally, I think the Hulk is merely Bruce Banner's surpressed anger and aggression given physical form. Jen probably isn't as surpressed, so she has more control over the power. At least that's my theory. If Bruce learns to accept the fact that the Hulk is a part of him, then he could control the power as well. People like Bruce are used to feeling anger but doing nothing about it, sometimes even refusing to admit that they are angry, even to themselves. That is why he will never admit that he and the Hulk are one and the same. In a way, it's similar to the way he avoided his cousin. To sum it all up: He's in denial.

Again, that's just my theory.

Also, Jennifers conversation with Bruce (I'm sure you can guess which one...) interested me greatly.

Until next time, your faithful reviewer, Captain D (the fanfic author, not the fish place) signing out.
Spidey3000
2008-06-30
ch 12,
abuseWhy did the avengers have to die? -cries- Oh well, I like the She-hulk's new powers! Update soon!
Vigatus
2008-06-23
ch 11,
abuseCool chapter. I hope you continue soon.
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