 The 3rd Valkyrie 2009-07-14 . chapter 7ah, cute. you must write more! you still haven't gottent to their wedding day! |
 younggem 2009-07-03 . chapter 6omg,
this has got to be the bestest nausica stories ever!! |
 reader of the open range 2009-05-28 . chapter 6 Nice work with spelling Nausicaa's name right ^^ though Asbel's home city is spelled Pejitei, and is technically a autonomous state... but that's only really important in the comic books/manga (it comes in both) where the story is in it's full with the autonomous states of the periphery (which contains the valley of wind, pejitei, and various other places), the kingdom of Torumekia which is technically attached to the states by various treaties, and the Dorok Principalities who the Torumekians are fighting against. You should read the books, they are a lot more confusing but have a much better story than the movie, since the movie was based off of the first couple issues or so of the comic.
Oh, and Asbel's sister's name is actually Rastel, it just sounds funny in the movie.
Other than that little drabble, I would like to say that you have a wonderful writing technique, and thank you for not blocking the anonymous comment thing as many have done. |
 Kaze-no-Tenshi89 2008-09-02 . chapter 5aw i loved this one! i love how you wrote it =) so cute... |
 Voice of the Mist 2008-09-02 . chapter 5this is soo good! update!! |
 JGgirl 2008-09-02 . chapter 5that was so cute! his side was great! |
 Tsukihime Nee 2008-09-01 . chapter 5very nice! It was a welcome break to read through Asbels point of veiw and I understand what you mean. I find writing through a guy's point of veiw much harder since I'm female. but you did a good job! |
 Tsukihime Nee 2008-08-19 . chapter 4Arigato gozimasu!! you finally updated! very cute, so I hope you keep updating this because I like reading this. ( a break from all the bleach fanfiction I read) |
 Voice of the Mist 2008-08-08 . chapter 4that was soo funny! halarious! UPDATE! |
 JGgirl 2008-08-03 . chapter 4that was great! couldnt have laughed harder! |
 Cailunet 2008-07-23 . chapter 3Fluff. x3 I love the ending. |
 Moonfirestorm 2008-07-09 . chapter 2Woot! AsbelXNausicaa is awesome! Great job! |
 Brili'er 2008-06-21 . chapter 3Wow...that was adorable. My only problem with it was Naussica swearing so much. She's just not the swearing type and she genuinly loves her people so even if they made her go to meetings she probably wouldn't be so angry with them.
I loved Asbels character. It was potrayed well and he was still such a sweet gentleman.
Great story!Please keep it up! |
 Voice of the Mist 2008-06-18 . chapter 3i loved the ending. it was soo funny! i really hope you are going to write more. |
 JGgirl 2008-06-17 . chapter 3That was wonderful! The Fluff did not kill me but I did get a minor heartattack. |