=D I personally think the title should be Written In Crimson Ink.

=D. Just cause...XD

Good poems! Write more!

wow... i like it alot! :)

fantastic! but i feel so bad for carl. he's so lonely :(

I luv it! (as I do with every update!) Dude! I can't wait for more!! (okay I really CAN, b/c you're helping me with mine...but you know what I mean.)

Aiya!! This is so good! It was always good but it's getting better! I still adore it! I won't whine about updates since I can't even post my story...cuz I'm a moron...so I'll just say I loved the update and be on my way! ;}

Just keeps getting better and better!! I still absolutely love this!! I love the otehr update as well. I just never got a chance to review. Anywho...I'm not gonna write another novel here. Just wanted to say I luved the update here and there. Ttyl8r!! ;)

oh my gosh! these poems are amazing! good job :-D

Ah dude! That's sweet! I didn't know wtf I was reading for a sec then realized--oh the name's been changed!! I see. I love it though. It's awesome!! I lurve it! Can't wait for more of this and your other stories! ;)

Dude! I love it!! Very well written and very passionate (but what else have we all come to expect from you when you write for Carl-chan?) ;) I absolutely loved the update! I can't wait for more of this and your other unfinished stories!! I know they'll all be excellent! :)

This is just getting better and better!! I can't wait to read more of these!! I absolutely love them!! Update A.S.A.P kay?

Wow those are reallt good! My faves are 7 and 8. Just beautiful. Well done.

To put it simply...WOW. I was blown away by the power of this poem.

i have to say i really like it a lot i can relate to it cause i have a couple of poems that are something like that and i can let you read them if you like

Oh my God. I love it! It's still so amazingly written and has me hooked! I can't wait till the next update of this and your other stories! ;)

Oh my God!! This is just amazing!! I loved this chapter! Simply amazing! Very well written. I can't wait to read more from you.