I liked this. I could see this as really happening in the series and is most likely how their relationship as friends went. Snape, diappointed that Lily would only ever just be a friend.

Omg, that was so sad! You got me again!

That was just, amazing. Seriously, Rayne, great work! :D

You are quite the wordsmith ! This is great, I could see it happening :)

I really like your writing, I hope you write more Lily/Sev stories!

Aww. Poor Snape. Very cute.

Poor Severus. I love Evans/Snape pairings but I hate how the fanfics never allow them to be together. :\

aww so sad! Poor Snape. *adds to favorites*

I love it! As much as I liked seeing Snape being human in DH I still think that Lily never loved him more than a friend. Again Great story!

I LOVED IT!

it was like on of Severus's missing memories

you should write for a living lol

see you you-know-where

toodles

*runs off giggling*

I like your Lily/Snape story. It was kinda short though, I think it would be cool if you turned it into a series or something, but it's your choice. It was good though. -Serenikitty