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SpringCherryBlossom
2009-10-18 . chapter 24
Noesy, chit!!
realityfling18
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
loved it
Insanity at its Fullest
2009-10-03 . chapter 42
I love you, i love you, i do.

I like how the H/D interaction progresses slowly, instead of the cliche "Oh, you're a what? I love you. Let's shag now." type of thing. It's much more refreshing, much more realistic and natural. I dunno, i just really like how you developed their relationship.

So yeah, good job. :D
Fear-me-evil-bunnies
2009-09-30 . chapter 19
i know that this is my first review and i am dearly sorry for that. this story is wonderful. i love it very much. im so glad that its completed. i dont have to wait for more chapters now. ^_^
purplerawr
2009-09-12 . chapter 42
Holy basilisks that was a great story!

It had everything I look for in a fanfiction - an almost painfully slow, unobvious, awkward growing relationship between Harry and Draco (haha, I'm such a masochist in that way - I can't have them getting together too quickly), real raw emotions from characters (and your characterization! fantastic! Especially in the case of Snape, you wrote him superbly), utter drama (the twist at the end with Voldemort's use of Remus was great! Totally didn't see that coming!) the unnacepting Ron (haha, one of my favourite Rons) the saviour Hermione (that girl really is a saint...)

I will start a new paragraph for no reason: you also had a really good grasp on the social situations going on, all subtle expressions and conversations, and I really enjoyed the bits with Draco's fall and rise with his Slytherin house mates, it was all very believable. Plus, on a tangent, I really, really did appreciate the link you made with the wolf mates - Remus being with Sirius and then Draco, who Remus feels bound to look after being mates with Harry, Sirius' own godson - I don't know if that was intentional or not, but I thought it was really good.

I also really liked how you kept focus on all the plot lines going on, the Drarry stuff, the things with Ron and Hermione, the stuff with Remus and Snape (I never before this considered them together! You even got me liking the idea!) and all the things werewolf-related. I probably would have forgotten something after a while XD

I also really enjoyed the bits where Hary, Remus, Draco and Fang went out into the forest! I liked the 'pack' mentality there and all the wonderful descriptions. The whole Harry-seeing-Draco-naked thing was a bonus too, haha. In fact, all of the Drarry bits were just wonderful, and I liked how in some ways their relationship stayed the same, especially in the fact that Draco didn't get OOC at all, you wrote him spectacularly well too.

Now I really will stop prattling! (I would have given more reviews, but wanted to read on too much - my apologies on shoddy reviewing) Well done on a fantastic story! I will be looking at your others!

- Purplerawr
amazed
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
I loved it. Completely loved it. Good job. Very well written. Just in case you missed it (and because I want to say it again) I loved this story! It's great! I can't get over it. I absolutely loved it.
Clara
2009-08-30 . chapter 30
Holy Cow, You actually made me cry. I have read hundreds of fanfictions (all of the stories about Harry dying of cancer included) and never once have I cried. The simpleness of the moments you create, and how utterly human your characters are is astounding and powerful. You are very talented writer and this story is genius, it is one of the first in which I have liked both Harry and Draco.
Impius
2009-08-26 . chapter 22
Just so you know, you used Slughorn's name in this chapter as the potions professor, when it's actually Snape, since Remus is the defense professor. Only in one sentence, but when I read it, I was like, "Wait, what?" This is the sentence you mixed it up in: "He wasn't sure, but he thought he saw her smirk, before launching into a speech about what requirements Slughorn had set them."
LavenderSpice
2009-08-22 . chapter 42
This is one of the best Draco/Harry fics I have ever read. I love how you realistically portrayed Draco as a werewolf. Amazing, thanks :-)
rayray
2009-08-19 . chapter 42
this story is awesome. well done. it's fics like these that rejuvinate me when i feel like i'm sifting through well-intentioned but dissappointing harry potter fanfics. i've been drifting away from fanfiction recently, but you pulled me back! ;) and btw, it's the first non nc-17 fic i've read in AGES. kinda sweet, in a way.
Mothball-Milkshake
2009-08-16 . chapter 42
Oh man. Now I have to find another story to read. I really loved the way you used the 'werewolf mate' situation, it was brilliant. Everyone was in character and any development they did was completely believable, especially on Draco's part.
I'd love to see you try and write a Remus/Sirius story, one day.
Marie
2009-08-13 . chapter 42
wowzah! i just read that whole story. All 42 chapters! it took me like all night! i love how everyone stays in charachter. its like it really could be happeneing in the book. please write more stories about draco
btw im reading redeemable: Love It!
Professor Potter-Malfoy
2009-08-11 . chapter 42
A brilliant fic - I love Draco as a werewolf!
faithaholic
2009-08-03 . chapter 42
loved the story!! but... there was no kissage at the end... i was just *waiting* for that last kiss :(
Doni
2009-08-03 . chapter 42
Wow! What an absolutely wonderful story you've created here! I was engrossed from beginning to end and loved your what you did with the characters while still keeping them true. This has got to be one of the best stories I've read on this site!
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