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| friendsislife 2008-10-11 ch 2,  | abuseOh my gosh, this is so good! Please please please update son :D |
| anabuhnahnuh 2008-05-28 ch 2, | abusethis story's so great. please update! |
| Jana 2008-01-27 ch 2, | abuseI like this. Tough subject matter. As a person who is overweight, I can relate to this very well. I've never been bulimic, or anorexic (I like food too much, and hate puking), but I've tried other drastic measures. Here's just a couple things - got a few typos. They happen (I make mistakes constantly), just wanted to mention it. Also, try dropping to the next line when a new person is speaking. I had to reread a few lines, cause I didn't realize someone else was talking. Also, try to really delve into how Monica is feeling about all this. Try to tap into her emotional state. You've been doing fantastic so far, but I just wanted to, maybe, I don't know, remind you, not to lose sight of that. Also, longer chapters would be awesome. Hope I'm not sounding too critical. It's a great story, and I'm very much looking forward to seeing what you do with it. MTLBYAKY |
| MoNdLeRfOrEvEr 2008-01-25 ch 2, | abuseOMG great story whats happens?? keep writing please! |
| Alisha 2008-01-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseI think this story is a good story. but i hope chandler finds out before its too late or monica comes to her senses and realizes chandler loves her for who she is, not what size clothing she wears. Anyways please update soon |
| raelenie 2008-01-22 ch 2, | abusethat's so cool love the first two chapters and can't wait for the next one! |
| F.R.I.E.N.D.S IS 4EVER 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseOk so that first review i sent you was suppossed 2 be for this chapter! But anyway, great fic i love it, kinda sad though! Can't wait for more, you're a very talented writer, keep up the great work and please, please update soon! |
| F.R.I.E.N.D.S IS 4EVER 2008-01-22 ch 2, | abuseOk, i really really like this story! You have to keep going! Great first chapter! |
| EstellaB 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good start for a fic. Look forward to reading the next chapter, and hope that it's going to turn out all right in the end. |
| Jen22e 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abusereally good! keep writing, i'm really glad u made monica have a baby. so please update!! |
| Stephanie Kelly 2007-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story has started really well, and it has the potential to do very well and go far. I hope you keep it up, coz I wanna find out what happens!! |
| Fighting-this-War 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseomg please update I love this! |
| pixie stix pixie queen 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseThat is an intriguing pov. I mean they showed how easy she can be influenced in that one thanksgiving epi. (Where Chandler called her fat so she lost all the weight)... good idea. Keep it up. |
| Kate56 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseMonica's past weight problems make this is a very intersting storyline. I can't wait to see where you go with it. |