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| The13thHour 2008-09-17 ch 8, anon. | abuseAw... That was a very good story. A little bit GORY at times but still. I enjoyed it. |
| ponygirl-loves-mcqueen 2008-08-22 ch 8,  | abuseOh, I loved it! that was so awesomely good! Keep up the GREAT work! |
| Jimmy Candlestick 2008-05-26 ch 8, | abusethat was a nice ending... |
| AleksandryaGregonovitch 2008-05-18 ch 8, | abuseLoved it!! Is there going to be a sequel? Update Soon! |
| rid3r chick 2008-05-18 ch 8, | abusei absolutely loved it! this chapter did make up for the long absence. aw. |
| oirishgoddess 2008-05-18 ch 8, | abuseAW! brotherly-bonding. how sweet. and this is the end?? NO *cries* ah well, it was great whilst it lasted. im glad that wolf and alex are really getting along this well now; its kinda like alex can be like raimundo-not replace him, but kind of like another brother for wolf. which is cool. and i loved that bit at the end; putting a bit of spiritualism into it! greatgreatgreatgreatgreat. be very proud! so well done. :) |
| MarauderetteLily 2008-05-18 ch 8, | abuseAs usual, this is a work of art! I really love this chapter because it shows that wolf and alex can relax and have their moments together. This is really geat! thankyous for updating! Till next time, LILY |
| Gold is power 2008-05-18 ch 8, | abuseit was a very good ending. loved it! |
| Lee Pyro 2008-05-18 ch 8, | abuseWoah, that was weird! A good ending though. I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for sticking with it till the end. It was an awesome ride. Keep writing. |
| Illusjon 2008-05-13 ch 7, | abuseHi! I recently found this story, and I read in in under two hours (I'm so proud of myself XD). It's AWESOME! I love it. You got nice descriptions and a great storyline. The whole thing is just PERFECT! I also liked the way you pulled out Wolf's story in this... I've always wondered how he ended up in the army (if he voulentered or anything), and even though your theory isn't the TRUE one (like wirtten by Anthony Horowitx ;)) it's still a great one. I love it! And Wolf's brother. He's just so... I don't know... over- protective in a good way. Both he and Wolf are brilliant characters in this story, so WAY TO GO! Please don't say that this was the last chapter, is it? I certainly doesn't hope so! It's so great so please don't end it here. Please! PLEASE! So PLEASPLEASEPLEASE update soon. You haven't updated it in like 4-5 months... :'( PLEASE! /Illusjon |
| PleiadesWolfe 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuselol. Well if he gives him a hard time it might help the brother act along. |
| oliveoil889 2008-04-13 ch 7, | abuseGood job! |
| oirishgoddess 2008-04-04 ch 7, | abuseIT IS NOT REALLY THAT BAD! it is BRILLIANT!! *does crazy AR fic-induced dance* amazing, i tell you! its half one in the morning and im not really what you could classify as alive but i can stil tell its amazing!! hahaa. great writing, great plotline (i officially HATE MI6-i mean, how COLD does blunt wanna get??) and great everything, really. that torture...was...disgusting. how could anyone live through that?? and the fact that it was a 14 year old (or is he 15 by now??) BOY that went through it and still managed to survive...wow. i mean, thats impressive. and wolf-that whole thing about his brother rai? yeah, that was sad. :( its nice to have some more background information, though. and i really like santiago as well. i was literally CHEERING when he pulverised dr. three. HAHAH YOU DESERVED IT YOU MONSTERR! but i was practically crying this chapter, when jack was listening in at the doorway to alex and toms conversation...so upsetting :( :( :( if i was her, i would feel so BAD, even though it is so not her fault. poor jack. so basically, all this wittering on means 1 thing: I LOVE IT!! well done, you should be proud. :) |
| TanyaPotter 2008-03-29 ch 6, | abusei could be wrong.. cause im really tired right now... but isnt there’s five; You, Santiago, Jack, Sabina, Tom and Jerry.” that six people??/ anywaz, i really love this ficcy! wolf is my favorrite character in the alex rider world, and i wish there were more fics about him! keep up the writing! |
| fadamaja 2008-03-25 ch 7, | abusei love it i cant wait for the rest. alex look so real and the history of wolf...WOW |