I'm very impressed with this story and your writing. It's subtle and mature and full of life. I can't wait to see how you play out this love triangle.

Oh~ I found this story via LiveJournal and I'm glad I used up my "should be getting ready to go out" time to start reading it!

It's really well-written, so far. And though I don't really know the characters other than how you've portrayed them it doesn't really matter, because it still makes all sorts of sense... :D

Basically, I

I'm liking this story. Poor Dee is having a rough time and while I feel sorry for JJ, he's still a little ** for trying to make a move on a drunk Dee.

so sad at this chapter and interesting choice of drinks...didn't know those existed x.x (I knew the long island teas from my drunk women co workers and old high school class mates horror stories...)

I really like this story and finally reviewing each chapter now; I wonder what kind of turnout it will be...since I do see dee/jj fics >_>;

oh god, this was so sad!! extremely well written, but--poor JJ! I could really envision him in that bathroom. The little fool! And Dee; what a bastard! Can't he realize JJ loves him as much as he loves Ryo? Love this story, and what you are doing with it.Please, keep it going!

Moon

Another chapter that keeps me longing for more. :) Good job, and keep writing fast! Give us more, more, more! *wink* Poor JJ. It's easy to push him to the side and make fun of him, but I think we all forget about this part of him alot of the time, especiailly newer authors in their fics.

Excited to see where you go with Dee and Ryo next chapter! I hope we get some dialogue or fighting, or some movement towards understanding!

Good luck. I'm awaiting eagerly. :)

Dark

I've never liked J.J., but you've made me interested in knowing more about him after all. Where J.J. realizes he really *loves* Dee that was powerful. And I am ** at Ryo who I adore, but J.J.'s right he needs to appreciate Dee more.Heartbreaking and insightful. Thank you, Libe

I'm so glad you're continuing this. Ryo deserves to be a little worried after the way he's been treating Dee.

Hey Tenth,

I've been reading some of your other stories for a while, mostly the oneshots that are already finished, and I'm loving them. Especially this one. It's a new twist that I haven't read before, which is nice, and your style is really readable too, which is good, 'cause you know how writers on the site can be! Anyway, I hope you keep working on this piece! I can't wait to see what happens. Especailly what Ryo's reaction to Dee storming out was, and why he's been acting odd. As well as where this conversation with JJ goes! It feels like JJ might actually end up giving Dee advice instead of just glomming.

Good luck, and here's hoping there's a new chapter soon!

Thanks,
Dark

Really interested to see where this is going. I'm hoping for more than a small surface problem and a lot of understanding. Rooting for misunderstandings, miscommunications and some flaring tempers... more-than-general CONFLICT, if ya get me! Or maybe I'm just bloodthirsty

Heh, when I saw the "REJECTION" in big capital letters, I thought of someone saying, "Rejected!" a la Yugioh the Abridged Series. Funny stuff. ^_^

Oh noes! What's gonna happen! I like the frankness of the style. ^_^ Not gratuitous, but not sappy, either.

this is pretty good so far! i hope that you update soon! :3

This is a great beginning. I'm interested in seeing where you're going w/this. Hopefully to a happy ending after many frequently updated angst filled chapters. ;) Libe

Aww, poor Dee.

Awesome fic!

This is really good :)
Aw what's wrong with Ryo? Poor Dee.
Update soon please! ^^