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| thor-a-dore 2008-08-27 ch 1,  | abuseI like it, that was really good, thanks |
| Allegra.Jane.Alec 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abuseI love the Volturi! (Creepy, I know...!) |
| Kyprish Prophetess 2008-08-11 ch 1, | abuseOk. It was Heidi. You should write about how she learns that the 'puny cow' was the human he thought was dead. |
| I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI DON'T LIKE HER! SHE'S LIKE TANAYA |
| Tassel630 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseIt's interesting how you interpreted Heidi to be so sure that Bella meant so little to Edward that she (Heidi) would consider no option other than the ones that seemed obvious to her. If that sentence made any sense at all. Anyway, nice job on creating a round character out of a flat outline. /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\ -The Stupid Crazy Insane Idiotic Weirdo known as Tassel630 -Please don't respond to this review- |
| MoonlightShadowOfADarkDream 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseIt was interresting. I always wondered what those cryptic words meant ("nice fishing"), but it sure makes sense. |
| LuvAtFirstBite 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abusePlease hurry with the next chapter! |
| Sophia 2008-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was fantastic, this is the first story i have read from Heidi's point of view, she is a really interesting character. Really enjoyed reading it! |
| .n.a.y.a.z. 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseek heidi's such a **. it's interesting to see her point of view though. really. edward refuses to live in a world without bella and MARCUS is the sentimental one? okay. |
| disneydork 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was good! |
| HeswamtoFrance 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseWow wonderful. you captured heidi so well. love it! george |
| Hyacinth Blue 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abusei really like you writing style and the way you had heidi act, it was in her character |
| Jayde3 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseYou're such a great writer! Keep up the amazing work! |
| breakdown156 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseHm, this was very well written, good job! but it makes me hate Heidi for calling Bella a cow and wanting Edward... Haha but great story. ~ColtonsGurl540~ |
| Angel of Music Play for Me 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseUgh, Carlisle! I feel like growling. It was written well...too well that it makes me hate Heidi for wanting Edward. |