hmm. Heidi is most interesting. Anyway, good job luv it luv it luv it etc!
write again!!

I love that you described the mechanics of the room. ..as sick as its purpose is. LOVED the lines at the end "playing with food", "dinner and a date".

Thanks for entertaining me while I couldn't sleep. I've been reading a few of your stories. ...And shall read more when I can not sleep again. ...probably tomorrow.

Amazing to read what the Volturi thought of all this. lol

Heidi is very unsympathetic. It's kinda funny how she thinks. I liked this:)

i like it! :D haha

Oh this was cool! Great new perspective from Heidi. Do you know where I can find other stories of this challenge?

wow shes mean.

Nice job. For what little we know about Heidi, I think you portrayed her well.

the first word that came to my mind at that last sentance was '**'

We, that was fun. Of course she'd lust after Edward, hah.

I like how you don't realize who it is until the end. While I was reading it I thought it was like felix or another guy until Demitri spoke to her. Anyway good job on the story and good luck with other writing!

I like it, that was really good, thanks

I love the Volturi! (Creepy, I know...!)

Ok. It was Heidi. You should write about how she learns that the 'puny cow' was the human he thought was dead.

I DON'T LIKE HER! SHE'S LIKE TANAYA