 XXTeamVolturiXX 2009-11-27 . chapter 1hmm. Heidi is most interesting. Anyway, good job luv it luv it luv it etc!
write again!! |
 KristyRose 2009-09-03 . chapter 1I love that you described the mechanics of the room. ..as sick as its purpose is. LOVED the lines at the end "playing with food", "dinner and a date".
Thanks for entertaining me while I couldn't sleep. I've been reading a few of your stories. ...And shall read more when I can not sleep again. ...probably tomorrow. |
 Goddess-Divine-05 2009-08-17 . chapter 1Amazing to read what the Volturi thought of all this. lol |
 Kenzi Black-Lautner 2009-07-05 . chapter 1Heidi is very unsympathetic. It's kinda funny how she thinks. I liked this:) |
 sintRizzie 2009-05-07 . chapter 1 i like it! :D haha |
 InkHeart17 2009-04-01 . chapter 1Oh this was cool! Great new perspective from Heidi. Do you know where I can find other stories of this challenge? |
 xoxocullenluverxoxo 2009-03-14 . chapter 1wow shes mean. |
 dyingimmortal 2009-02-06 . chapter 1Nice job. For what little we know about Heidi, I think you portrayed her well. |
 mrs edward masen cullen 2009-01-06 . chapter 1 the first word that came to my mind at that last sentance was '**' |
 Sorceress Jade 2009-01-06 . chapter 1We, that was fun. Of course she'd lust after Edward, hah. |
 MintCcIceCream 2008-11-08 . chapter 1I like how you don't realize who it is until the end. While I was reading it I thought it was like felix or another guy until Demitri spoke to her. Anyway good job on the story and good luck with other writing! |
 thor-a-dore 2008-08-27 . chapter 1I like it, that was really good, thanks |
 Allegra.Jane.Alec 2008-08-14 . chapter 1I love the Volturi! (Creepy, I know...!) |
 Kyprish Prophetess 2008-08-11 . chapter 1Ok. It was Heidi. You should write about how she learns that the 'puny cow' was the human he thought was dead. |
 SleathyNinja 2008-07-21 . chapter 1I DON'T LIKE HER! SHE'S LIKE TANAYA |