Nice it sounds really good totaly like a human eating rose.( you know becaue eating people makes you mean )

that was great and all but i was hoping for one of the Volturi, such as Aro or Marcus or Caius... could get really interesting! and i don't mean that this wasn't - it's great! but i think of the possibilities! o!

nice story!

Wow, this is good! Nice interpretation

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This was fantastic, I loved getting to see this scene thorugh his perspective! It was absolutly amazing! It was very well-written and I enjoyed reading it!

excellent job capturing her POV...awesome job!

It's really good. Please go to my page and check out "vampire love" heidi is in it, and she has the same feelings for edward too...

That was great! You made Heidi so cool! Haha. If she only knew what Edward was really thinking at that point. LOL. I loved it!

Oh ! That was great ! I love how she delicately mentions Aro could have an underlying fear of Carlisle. That is a very exciting possibilty.. Something to explore perhaps. I love that I suddenly had a new sympathy for Marcus, losing his own mate !

Love it !

This is great. I've never particularly wondered what was going through the Volturi's heads that day, but I realize now that it was probably the event of the week! You've really captured the character, based on what little information we have.

Very good- but where do you find all these challanges? I've cecked the Lexicon, and I can't ever find them until its too late.

Heidi is not exactly a common choice of POV's and you portrayed her very well, in my opinion. Keep it up! This site neds as many prolific writers as it can get!

Simply amazing. Never stop writing!