|Reviews for Fishing|
| UNknowen 8/5/07 . chapter 1
Nice it sounds really good totaly like a human eating rose.( you know becaue eating people makes you mean )
| Sorcha123 8/5/07 . chapter 1
that was great and all but i was hoping for one of the Volturi, such as Aro or Marcus or Caius... could get really interesting! and i don't mean that this wasn't - it's great! but i think of the possibilities! o!
| rachelthebooklover 8/5/07 . chapter 1
| BoysInBooksAreBetter 8/5/07 . chapter 1
Wow, this is good! Nice interpretation
| sounds of music 8/4/07 . chapter 1
This was fantastic, I loved getting to see this scene thorugh his perspective! It was absolutly amazing! It was very well-written and I enjoyed reading it!
| Llama Mama23 8/3/07 . chapter 1
excellent job capturing her POV...awesome job!
| agoldensmile 8/2/07 . chapter 1
It's really good. Please go to my page and check out "vampire love" heidi is in it, and she has the same feelings for edward too...
| Warui-Usagi 8/2/07 . chapter 1
That was great! You made Heidi so cool! Haha. If she only knew what Edward was really thinking at that point. LOL. I loved it!
| Neave 8/1/07 . chapter 1
Oh ! That was great ! I love how she delicately mentions Aro could have an underlying fear of Carlisle. That is a very exciting possibilty.. Something to explore perhaps. I love that I suddenly had a new sympathy for Marcus, losing his own mate !
Love it !
| thesunshinekid 8/1/07 . chapter 1
This is great. I've never particularly wondered what was going through the Volturi's heads that day, but I realize now that it was probably the event of the week! You've really captured the character, based on what little information we have.
| nothingmoreridiculous 8/1/07 . chapter 1
Very good- but where do you find all these challanges? I've cecked the Lexicon, and I can't ever find them until its too late.
Heidi is not exactly a common choice of POV's and you portrayed her very well, in my opinion. Keep it up! This site neds as many prolific writers as it can get!
| Lily 8/1/07 . chapter 1
Simply amazing. Never stop writing!