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| LordLanceahlot 2007-11-04 ch 1,  | abuseReally cute! Great job there. :) |
| Sarah9488 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was too cute. i had to laugh and I was ahving aaw moments. i definitely have to read Family... |
| luli27 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseOh, lovely. I really liked and I also liked your story Family. I hope you continue it and post soon; all of the ideas you proposed sounded fine. I'd offered to help you with the one you're having problems but I'm in the middle of finishing my own stories; though if you just need some advice feel free to ask. One little thing though, you might want to break the story some, you know a few extra spaces or line, when you go from one scene to another. It'll just make it flow much easier. |
| SquintSquad10 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseAw, so cute, loved it!! :-) |