 crazyjim87 2009-12-21 . chapter 3hey i read the story so far and i love it. I would like to ask you when will you update it? It is the first story of it's kind i have read and i would like to see what happens next |
 WeakMindedFool 2009-11-17 . chapter 1Well, I have to say, I'm impressed. Whenever I see a crossover that I think just can't work I have to take a look to see how bad the car crash is actually going to be. It's always refreshing to see the skill of a story teller take a kookie idea and make it... riveting? Believable? at any rate, well done! I look forward to your next update... Thanks for writing it! |
 SuperiorShortness 2009-11-08 . chapter 3Another cliffy of brilliance... Hope to see this picked up one day. |
 Lord of Murder 2009-10-11 . chapter 3Very interesting and different story. I hope you continue it eventually. |
 Lt. Thornton 2009-09-27 . chapter 3this story is so awesome, i love it. |
 Isis the Sphinx 2009-09-26 . chapter 3This was inspired, and an unusualy crossover. I have no problem waiting months at a time for an update, I do it a lot. Brilliant story. Keep writing!
P.S. Warn me if you transfer writing of this fic to someone else. |
 lampman 2009-09-26 . chapter 1great story i'm a massive fan of yours and can't wait for the new chap which no offence is takeing a while |
 Timballisto 2009-09-08 . chapter 3You can't just stop like this! It's been a year since you've updated man! That's almost illegal!
Really, the way you write is so...real, and accurate.
Your paragraphs are a bit long though, try to break them up, it makes people want to skip the bulk of it and skip on. |
 Atrer Potter 2009-08-23 . chapter 3Great Story. The writing for the fight scenes was really epick and well done. I hope you decide to continue writing and pick this story up again, it's a shame to see stories get abandoned.
Best of luck. |
 Leelu's skittles 2009-08-21 . chapter 3Your story has me absolutely enchanted. It's not only the mixing of two gnre's that I'd never considered before (plot bunnies Ahoy!) but the way that you've written it is amazing. The way you describe things in here has enthralled my mind and snared me so utterly and completely. Completely and utterly brilliant. Way better than a Legal Studies essay. I cannot wait until you have your next chapter posted, whenever that may be. |
 Mr Stereo1 2009-08-17 . chapter 3Wow, great fic. Shame you don't seem to have time to write anymore. Or some of the reviewers who threaten bodily harm have come through with the threat. Anyway, the writing styles good, the characters are well developed, and the storyline so far is good. So there's the bribe! PLEASE write more! |
 mumu15 2009-08-14 . chapter 3this story is awesome. i know that you have not updated this story for a long time, but i hope you reconsider and continue it now. =D |
 Orchamus 2009-08-03 . chapter 3Truly a masterwork. If this has been abandoned, we readers can only hope that someone picks it up. |
 Orchamus 2009-08-03 . chapter 2Gotta ask, but when ARE you going to update your stories? Neither has been in a long long time. This especially could use it. |
 Orchamus 2009-08-03 . chapter 1hUZZAH! |