I really wish you had of continued this by having Jou accept Marik's offer. *sigh* I loved it regardless.

Oh my... Fadeshipping. I never saw this before... I knew of it's existence, but actually reading something about it, never. And it was awesome! Truly amazing. The deal with the devil. Simply genius. Definitely a story to read more than just 1 time.

Wow... This Is The First YMxJ Pairing Fic I Have Ever Read! You've Just Made A Fan Out Of Me!
This Fic Is Brilliant, I Really Hope This Gets Updated! Please!
Xx

And I loved it every bit, god this was so fucking hot.

This is cool! I love how you wrote Marik's personality. XD *thumbs up*

Omigod this was awesome!!
xDD
You just got me addicted to this couple~~
xD
So damn lucky fanfiction has a search engine!

I loved this! It was so good!!^^
Especially for your first time (my first time writing a fanfic wiht a pairing in it sucked)!!
*Hugs* Thank you for the great story!!^^

Awesome, I've never read that pairing before, but now I want to read more. Please write another one. It totally rocked!

new chapter PLEASE
I love this so much
Id like to know jou his answer
please please please 1 more chappie

FUCKING AWSOME! YOU BETTER MAKE A SEQUEL TO THISS! i want more of this please! COME ON THAT WOULD BE SO COOL SEEING WHAT JOU'S ANSWER IS!
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please cosider makking a sequel to this thank you very much *bows*

Wow... Best of the three. ^_^
It was so realistic... I can seriously believe that really happened in the manga... Marik really would have known Joey’s mind... Know his deepest desires and use them against him - so in character for Marik. And those desires, although Joey’s friendship won the battle before, seemed very true - Joey’s wish was to become a true duelist, right? That meant that he wanted power and recognition... The description was wonderful, too. I could picture so many things so clearly in my head. When Mai was mentioned, I could picture what that flashback thingy would look like on TV. How you described their faces and voices was very nice (I wish you’d tell me how you figure out what words to use to do that, since I can’t seem to do it...). The end, while reading, I wondered if it would be very good or not, and you actually found a way to make it very true to the show/manga. I mean, Marik tried going for Odion over and over and Yami or someone would always show up in the nick of time - just like in this. It was wonderful...
The very end, though, I was a little confused about. It seemed like Joey would go along with Marik, but he couldn’t or else it wouldn’t go in with the storyline. If you gave a reason for Joey not accepting Marik’s offer, I think it could have been better.
Oh, and one criticism... It was very long. It seemed like it took forever to get halfway down the page... But, at least it was interesting, unlike some long and boring stories, so it almost makes up for it.
Well, I hope the others like that psychological stuff as much as I do. ^_^ You deserve the majority for this round.

Can write more of this story because I am HUNGRY for more and besides there are very few Marik x Jou fics out that I can find.

I really like the story you should wright a sequel to put what Jou chose and what happened after