hey,I just came across this story, I like it very much!
will you continue it? I hope so!
don't leave us hanging:)

Please continue. These characters and this story line are far to developed, even in these early chapters for you to simply abandon them. Plus, if you don't continue I'll have to hunt you down and I already have a busy couple of days ahead of me and I would rather not spend time hunting down someone just to find out the end of a fanfic. Be warned...if I am forced to track you down, I will not be a happy person when I find you, and will probably resort to twisting your ankle. All of that to say don't abandon this story ~_^

-Lunar Sun

Not ambiguous at all...D:

Now, I'm curious.

Perfect witness to what?

To his betrayal to Voldemort? Or something like that?

So that when Voldemort is dead (hopefully), he will get off scot-free.

Maybe.

Either way, update soon so I can find out! :D:D:D

Will you be continuing this fic? It's really promising. You've got both characters really well written and I'm really interested to see where this will go.

I love your story so far, and hope it's not abandoned! Looking forward to reading more if you find the time to write it! :)

haha
“Sex?”

“Are you offering it?" Snape asked without missing a beat.

"No!" Hermione cried, indignant.

"Then, no," Snape replied without looking up, a hint of amusement in his tone.

hahahahahahah
please write more

This is a very intriguing start and I encourage you to keep on with this story when you have the time. :)

This is great. The characterization of both characters is wonderful. I see you haven’t updated this for a while, I do hope you plan to continue this story. Now I’m off to read your other story.

The plot thickens. Great chapter.

I came here to read Antiquity’s Corollary, but got side track by this. Great first chapter.

update update update ... son


i like it i wanna see where it goes... i think snape is a little too harsh but i dont mind i like the story line and plot idea.

Love, love, love it! Hope you continue!

Nice, can't wait to see how he forms her into the "perfect witness."

I have enjoyed this interesting chapter. Have a good day tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-) More please. Thank you.

That was fairly intense. She is going to have to start eating, though.