very good, awesome portrayal of Big Al!

That was pretty dramatic, poor rachael, I wonder how she would react the next time she saw the real Trent, that would make for a interesting follow on. Good work on a creepy, gripping one shot. x

Wow! very dramatic. I love this story. It is very intense

wow pretty intense. You captured Al's character perfectly.

Please, PLease, Write a sequel, i am begging you lol

Oh, Rachel. Mragh. Good scene, but no reciprocal feeling! Why am I so darned picky? *sigh* Regardless, nice writing.

That was intense. It made me feel bad for Rachel! And you sure made Al be an a-hole! Well written and I'm looking forward for more...maybe some true Trench fics! ;)

Wow, talk about intense. Poor Rachel, she kicks ** yet this chapter really showed her so vulnerable.

Ok first, great story its a little darker than what I normally read but I liked it. I'm a big fan of Trench fics and I liked how you implied that in the story. I would like it very much if you would write a sequel in which Trent finds out what Al did.

Wow. I must say you've got the characterization down pat. Great job with this one.

I've been waiting for a good Rachel/Al story for months now. I just wanted to say, that was great! The fact that he used Trent just made it better because those are the two relationships I want to see more than anything. ^_^ Anyway, keep going, you're good.

glad to see i'm not alone in the rachelxtrent thing. people seem to always think i'm crazy for thinking there was any chemistry between them.

and i can't wait until you write one about cassiexpritkin! let me know if you ever do :) you seem like the only one i've ever read who could pull it off.

o my...glad someone else is as obsessed with Rachel and Trent (or at least a pretend Trent) as I am. Great job capturing the side of Al we see in FFDM.

WOW! that was really interesting, but short :(...Hope u can continue, or write more Al/Rachel fics, cuz i luv that pairing...Good work..!!

I LOVED it. You should do an AL/Ceri