 Rori Potter 11/13/11 . chapter 24That was brilliant. Update soon. |
 HP.HG. fan forever 9/26/11 . chapter 24It's been years since you wrote this. Are you done or is there more? |
 HP.HG. fan forever 9/26/11 . chapter 23Why is it that when people write these stories, and Harry is looking for someone, they always forget the map. He always refers to the map. |
 HP.HG. fan forever 9/25/11 . chapter 12What is your take on the lemon drops. Almost no one, even JKR had them eat them. |
 HP.HG. fan forever 9/25/11 . chapter 10I quite agree. Where the twins are fun to be around, they lack the maturity Harry needs when dealing with emotions that are foriegn to him. Having been denied love his whole life, it would be difficult for him to understand what he feels.
Thanks for a great chapter. |
 alix33 8/26/11 . chapter 1"I saw you come in and proceed to toss yourself at that couch." With a grin she said, "A bit disturbing really… You seemed quite intent upon making a move on that couch." - Hehehe.
"Harry smiled. He still had approximately two hours of sol… well… mainly solitude. Hermione was still in the room, but he had nothing to worry about from her… She was content to simply continue reading, and leave him be. The bookworm had an uncanny knack for knowing what Harry wanted. "I love this couch…" Harry said, lying across it with a grin. "After a day like this, I need to relax…" Chuckling, Hermione spoke from behind her newspaper, saying, "Well, why don't you ask the couch to the Yule Ball? I'm sure it would be very responsive…" - Hehehe. |
 DarkWolfDeltas 5/12/11 . chapter 23Man, you just can't kill Cedric. You just can't.
And daw. Harry's in love and doesn't even know it. How cute. |
 DarkWolfDeltas 5/12/11 . chapter 22Oh no! Don't kill Cedric! |
 DarkWolfDeltas 5/12/11 . chapter 21Ha ha. Finally, Rita is done. She was such a pest and a completely unrelenting sociopath. |
 DarkWolfDeltas 5/11/11 . chapter 20Good chapter as usual. Yay for more happy Harry! |
 DarkWolfDeltas 5/11/11 . chapter 19Harry: 3
Snape: 0
Yes, Harry. Please smile more. Frowning doesn't suit a Gryffindor. |
 DarkWolfDeltas 5/11/11 . chapter 18Aww. Did Hermionie really have to get THAT angry? I mean me personally, I wouldn't have got angry at a joke like that. But I'd say till the end of the day and maybe into the morning of the next tops if she really had to be angry about it. Even if she was playing with him, it was a tad too overreactive for me. Didn't ruin the story though. |
 DarkWolfDeltas 5/11/11 . chapter 17That was a nice thing Hermionie did for Harry. Always cheering him up and encouraging him, she is.
But y'know, I think it would be really nice if the tables were turned sometime and Harry was the one comforting Hermionie for some problem she has. I'd like to see the friendship Hermionie shows reciprocated through Harry. It'd kinda balence the relationship, y'know? That is...if you continue...and I hope you do...please do! |
 DarkWolfDeltas 5/11/11 . chapter 16Ha, nobody uses belts. :D
Nice to see them unwind. They deserve it with the stress of the challenges and Rita. |
 DarkWolfDeltas 5/11/11 . chapter 15Good chapter. Harry's lucky he's got so many people looking out for him. But he should maybe try and meet them half way and try a bit harder to not get so physical so quick. |