Interesting. I wonder who, or what attacked that Pikachu. I look forward to the next chapter.

THIS contains vivid imagery for a film opening. The rush of colour, and frondy, weedy texture isoriginal and visceral.

Gently place the thoughts and feelings of the creature (without being too obvious) as the story goes on.

Love it!

Sounds like it will be a true epic- I'm already getting the images in my head. Go , Poka...

Oh, nice way to start your story -with a wicked cool prophecy that hooks the reader's attention. Count me in for the story

this will be epic!

Sounds intriguing and I can't wait for the story to emerge.