odd couple...but hey it was cute

:P

aw sweet it made me have a really creep smile on my face :D ear to ear lol i watched this when i was a small kid like 7

I love this pairing! You made it work, babe! Yes, the difficulties in spelling & grammar (as well as the always tricky two-words-with-different-spellings-but-sound-the same) were much, but I really think this story deserves working on them. I know some people just aren't good at that kind of stuff, but I bet several people would love to give you a hand - including myself :) As I said, I think this story deserves polishing up, if only to help you convince further people of the validity of this pairing ;) - JB

its an interesting idea.

one thing, frankie grew up in the barrio in LA

not quiet, and definitely no stars. (smog)

Definitely an interesting plot bunny...Interesting...

Cool... some errors, but not a bad story. Keep writing!