This is seriously intriguing. I was hoping for a while that Kim and Shego would take a shot at what it was like to cuddle themselves, but oh well.

You evil man. You can not end it there. Write Book II!

...Please? 8D

This was pretty good. Although I'm a bit disappointed as I prefer crossover stories above just about all others, and seeing the opportunity you had here passing by is quite a let down. You might read "The Open Door" by Academia Nut as that story also deals pretty heavily with dimensional crossings, but it goes the extra mile and reaches out into other series instead of staying in variations of the same.

Good job on this.

Amazing story, hope you start posting Book II soon.

By the way, I think you may well have the best Villans in the history of KP fanfiction! Who could have thought!

A lengthy and entertaining ride. I do look forward to the beginning of the next book.

meta-4th-wall-breaking cum irony... delicious indeed.

For me...good and evil is a subjective thing, like it depends on who you ask, I mean I don't believe that the world is plain balck and white...so there could be things that is evil in one time but not in another...

Like...incest? I think first cousins then coul marry but now it's evil and taboo..like that

Hehehe

I still like this chapter despite what you've said on your note. Hehehehe

This might be a bit disappointing for some but if you really think of it? The chapter got a heart and it's a bit deep, need to think and need to feel.

Tehee!

ah you've killed me! I love how this fic is going, you're doing a wonderful job! It's seems you've been playing lotsa Half-life games with the whole portaln dementian thing. Also those 3 doctors! Gordon, Eil Vance And Kliener? Hmm... they sound familiar. lol. Wonderful Job! When's the next one!?

Wow that was awesome, just really exciting and the such. Umm I did notice a discrepancy that threw me for a loop. When Kim gets captured by athena, it says Cassie is there with her, when cassie is really with shego. Just pointing it out. I await your next book!

Another intense story, really doing your villains very well!

Wispr

Really enjoying the new and interesting plots you have been coming up with. Good work!

Wispr

This story is awsome!

I am uncertain if the number of typos is on the decline or if the chapter engrossed me enough that they became less noticeable to me. They are still there, things like gabs rather than gaps in blinds and 'we life in interesting...'

You commented once, and perhaps rightly, that I didn't put my characters through enough hell before bringing them together. (I paraphrase.) While I might be guilty as charged it is perhaps conversely true that you have gone to the opposite extreme. You might be amused to know that I ended up thinking of Voltaire's Dr. Pangloss as I read this. Like Leibniz you appear to support the proposition that we live on the best of all possible worlds.

Glad that Kim and Shego primes are finally talking with each other.

KiY

End of Book I?

Damn you did an awesome job capturing the chilling tone in this chapter. Also your writing really brings the characters to life.

Wispr

I like how you did the beginning of Shego's and Kim's relationship. Good work!

Wispr