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Mooncatcher
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
This story is awesome. I always thought the epilogue in The Deathly Hallows sucked because all it mentions are a couple of main characters. And it wasn't even that intricate; only about, what, ten twenty pages?
Pig and Winky were my favourite chapters, because non-humans never seem to get enough love.
Lady Catriona-Arre
2008-04-16 . chapter 9
Aw. thats so cute. Had me a little worried when i saw the heading was Denis ... but hey- thats just me being caught up in my own crazy world.

this was good. A little hard to follow at the beginning, but once you get past the first few sentences it all made sense.
cheerio
xox
amortentiaaa
2008-04-13 . chapter 9
Hm, this seems more like a chapter for Katie.

Btw, you spelled Dennis's name wrong. :D
100-percent-Harry-Potter-obsessed
2008-04-13 . chapter 9
Well, imagine my surprise to find an update in my inbox today (of which I was, quite obviously, thrilled)!

One word, Giddy:

Brill-iant.

Favorite lines?

“How’s the Quidditch team?”

“Lousy.”

“Slytherin’s?”

“Even worse.”

Even in the moments where a sad shadows hangs overhead, you always manage to fit that small bit appropriate humor in.

All in all, this was entirely worth the wait, and I thank you greatly for the dedication!

Fantastic, wonderful, awesomely-awesome job!

Your pal,

~100-percen-HP-obsessed
Mimander
2008-03-28 . chapter 5
I would like to point out that your story is very good but that Pig's real name is not Pigwindeon... it's Pigwidgeon
Sweets03
2007-12-03 . chapter 7
Ya know I've decieded that i J.K. jilled Fred she should have killed George too. Don't get me wrong I love george, but the twins with out one anouther is killed the one left anyway ugh.

Great chap, very depressing, but still good. It's very hmm hard to explain like different, but very much the sae as you like to do things...does that make sense? doubt it whatever. Off to review the next chap!
Lady Catriona-Arre
2007-12-03 . chapter 8
not bad at all. very poetic in parts, which i think is very fitting. andromeda seems a pretty mysterious character to me for some reason.

but in a good way.

loved this and as i said in the last review i really gotta run.

love love
Lady Catriona-Arre
2007-12-03 . chapter 7
that worked well. it worked very well.

and i really need to go finish assignments so i gotta run.

LOVE YOU MUCHLY!

xox
100-percent-Harry-Potter-obsessed
2007-12-02 . chapter 8
Flippin' genius, you are! Lol.

What can I say? It's as wonderful as ever...

I'd really like to see a mourning for Colin, if possible. Perhaps, a b-day a gift? (*wink-wink, nudge-nudge*)

It is, after all, the same day as Charlie's.

LOVING IT!

~100-percent-HP-obsessed
NickyFox13
2007-12-02 . chapter 8
*stands in awe at giddy's amazing updating powers*

Yes, I love that you included Andromeda. Very uderappreciated character, you did her justice. Andromeda's friendship with Molly is believable.

I love the story and hope you update soon.
amortentiaaa
2007-12-02 . chapter 8
Teddy is so cute! :D I miss Remus and Tonks the most out of all characters, hehe.
5redroses
2007-12-02 . chapter 2
I love the idea of fred being so organized as to have written letters to everyone, the spellotape was a nice touch.
confessions.of.katijane
2007-12-02 . chapter 8
you did wonderfully for no one knowing boo about andromeda! hee hee. i liked having her with molly, nice touch. & how cute is teddy!?

*sigh* of course, still heartbreakingly sad. here's another death i was pissed about. oh look, there are lupin & tonks randomly lying dead on the floor. let's not explain how they died...instead, let's talk some more about freaking harry. gah.

sorry for the rant. lovely job, my dear.
100-percent-Harry-Potter-obsessed
2007-12-01 . chapter 7
Oh! Why?! Why must you choke me up so? I had to go and unfog my glasses!

Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, as always.

Isn't it so odd how so many writers have grasped inspiration to write, through Fred's death? I found myself puttng pen to paper one day, a small diary conveying George's thoughts of it all, and my short one-shot, "One-Half," came of it.

Anyway, I loved it, and I look forward to reading more soon!

:D Your fan,

~100-percent-HP-obsessed
NickyFox13
2007-12-01 . chapter 7
I HATE YOU GIDDY FOR MAKING US WAIT SO LONG!

*dramatic pause*

Haha, jk, jk. I'll take you back cause your writing skills would be sorely missed. Glad to have you back, buddy! :D

Oh Fred...why did you have to leave us? Well, at least you are doing him justice giddy.

Great story idea and wonderful characterization. Update soon ^-^
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