Wow...this story intense! I love K/O drama oh so much, but this was even a little too much "I love you but we can't do this" I just adore your style and the way you describe their feelings. GRET WORK

Aw. That was wonderful, I really enjoyed that, although there were times whe I seriously wanted to slap both Oliver AND Katie.

Katie, for beig over-dramatic and Oliver for, well, his relentless pursuing of her. Although I guess his relentlessness (is that a word?) makes sense, considering he's always been a bit obsessive.

But, all in all, it was a really, really good fic. I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews :P

So while reading this I was listening to "Ghost" by Howie Day... I don't know, the story & the song just worked together :)

Good job on this one.
--Quafflepunchers

I would like to take a moment to say that this is upsetting. It's 4:38am. I told myself I would stop reading around chapter 5. Then it was chapter 7. Then I told myself "Chapter ten and then you're done!" Of course it wasn't that easy... I was really gonna go to bed after this one but now that he's freakin given up makes me go crazy. I won't be able to sleep. I suppose I shall have to read on...
~Cherriey

I would like to say that this is my FAVORITE couple ever.. they are adorable together. Seriously. They make me squeal and giggle and act like a little girl. ^.^ I like this chappy a lot.. it's very cute. I'm glad I found this story- I've read so many KBOW fics that I thought I was running out. Let me tell you- that's a scary thought! But thus far I love it and I shall continue reading!
~Cherriey

“'Don’t yell at me, Wood!'
'Get off this pitch now'"
Every time I want to write something about Katie and Oliver, I start like that. Yeah, it's 'plagio' but I can't help it.. Every time I start writing, I write that.. so I can't keep writing.. I feel.. guilty? I don't know how it makes me feel, but I just can't keep writing.
I'm not blaming you, please, don't get me wrong. I just wanted you to know what your fic means to me.
I truly like it. Yeah, was 'a little' sad and tormented, but I like it..
Hope you can forgive my last comment.. "wow".. wasn't really intelligent, eh? I know, that use to happens to me..

Anyway.. I like the ending, but I'm also waiting for an epilogue, as every one who has read this fic! I wish that you considered that ;)

Well. Now, yes. Nothing more.
Hugs!

I loved it, but it was just so sad! Can you put an epilogue or something up so that we know that they have a happily ever after?

so did katie stop being an idiot? i dont get it...r they back 2gether now or no?

omgeez. katie is being a whiny little *. i luv how u write this tho. it all sounds very natural. its just that katie sounds like one of those obnoxious people that overreact about everything. i mean really, an age difference? she should just forgive him and move on with her life instead of dragging it all out and making every1 around her miserable. oliver is way too hott and adorable 4 her to just leave and then hav herself regret it 4 the rest of her lonely little life...

i sound like a total pessimist rite there...lolz =]

Wow!

Argh, now you HAVE to wright very very quickly. This chapter was brilliant. Oh, Katie needs to forgive him xD Hm, perfect match.
Greetings,
Teilv

Please say this isn't the final chapter? That's too sad...
Great story, though. Please finish it?

Taken by itself this is a fantastic chapter, and I've been enjoying this story a lot... but I'm starting to get angst overdose. I'm beginning to feel annoyed with Katie instead of sympathetic toward her, and that's a shame because you write her so beautifully. Hope you're working toward a resolution, because as much fun as roller coasters are, eventually you want to get off and remember what a great ride it was.

Also wanted to say you do an amazing job with dialogue. Your characters converse very naturally and there's none of that "he said," "she said," kind of thing at the end of every line that can be so irritating.

Looking forward to seeing where you take this story next.

ugh katie is being such a pussy!
w.e update soon! ttyl
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This story is such a rollercoaster of emotions. And this chapter is so bittersweet. Good work. Looking forward to seeing how you decide to end this.

This chapter is sad. It's a really good chapter because it gives u a mind state from the characters points of views. You can feel their pain and happiness. Keep writing I want to see how you wrap it all up. =D

_ROCK_ON_

-ShadowedDark