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lulu halulu
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
Cute!
Nuclear Burp
2009-03-28 . chapter 1
D'aw. Although I think it's a little short for one night to become completely accustomed to a new lover.

Eh, someone told me that I didn't write Shikamaru as an energetic, reactive teen. Looking at this, seeing the parallels in our style, I think I wrote him well, and therefore you, by connection, did too.

Huzzah!

Nabanaba
Sheiryy
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
OMG, that was seriously too CUTEE!! X33

HAHAHAHA:
“Not until you resolve your sexual frustration,”
LOVED it! XD
Chouji is so awesome in this! xD

Loved it, extremely, adorably cute! :D
Write more! x3
shino1355
2008-09-04 . chapter 1
“Not until you resolve your sexual frustration,” Chouji calls from the relative safety of his bedroom, accompanied by much cackling.

I actually laughed out loud.
This is great.
I know it's complete, but maybe there could be a sequel where they tell everyone else they're dating?
JaliceLove
2008-08-31 . chapter 1
whyy? I like it :]
bobalinabokonon
2008-05-17 . chapter 1
Eh...cute...but when you say "sakura plants"...aren't those trees? I thought they'd be just artistic-looking cuttings from the tree but the "plant" seems to suggest something smaller...slightly confused...But anyway.
Toodles,
bobalina
smooth.stutter
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
LOVE it.
;]
angelicat123
2008-03-26 . chapter 1
aw, very cute.
Luff
2008-03-21 . chapter 1
Ha I'm officially in love with Choji!
But I never would have thought he was one to burn eggs :P
Shikamaru and Ino are so cute together huh?
-Loveydoveyeyes-
Well, I liked it, feel proud :)
Toodles
-Luff
Seresid
2008-03-20 . chapter 1
Hehhee. I love the humor you put into this. Especially this line right here:

“Please to resolve your sexual frustration with her before she talks my ear off with information I would rather not know such as the fact that Sakura is making Sasuke carry around condoms in his weapons pouch,” Chouji informs him, as calmly as though he is discussing a book he read last weekend.


I cracked up. You made my day. Feel special. :]

Well done.
solarise777
2008-01-14 . chapter 1
so sweet :)
McKenzie
2007-12-16 . chapter 1
Great story, update i wanna know waht happens
angelgrl
2007-12-10 . chapter 1
that was so cute1 i love how u made ino totally wreck the house and how shikamaru blames all his insane actions on wakin gup so early in the morning cause everyone is like that. they do mad wierd things when they arent fully awake. and i really like the fact that u placed chouji as a semi-main character in this story cause most ppl find a way to sorta make him around at times, but he plays a much needed role here, so good job!
Tsiuq
2007-11-26 . chapter 1
I'm addicted to cuddle scenes. fluff without an M rating is nice. :)
spidermermaid
2007-11-11 . chapter 1
afghjkl

Love.Love.Love.

It was so sweetandfunnyandwittyandsquealable :]
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