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| Moviegirl1616 2008-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseLOVE IT. |
| DevotedSerenity19 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story! |
| ChasingAfterADream 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseone of the best one shots ever! |
| coffee-addicted 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseYou definitely write the best Trory's fics that are out there. Loved their bunter, her rambling at first (and the hot sex of course). Amazing. You are an excellent writer! |
| mrmp 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseLove it! |
| starsfinallyxplode 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was hot, but also sweet, but not in a sticky-sugary-fluffy cotton candy way, like a lot of fanfics are. Although your grown-up Tristan and Rory are very different from the characters as we know them (especially Tristan), I think you pulled it off well. They didn't seem OOC because you included just enough facets of their old selves (Tristan's teasing and insatiable sexual appetite, Rory's embarrasment at the "Magdalene," etc.) to make it believable. |
| ggfan01 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! So sweet and beautifully written!! |
| iyasunflower 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abusewow its a great one shot. I'm wondering if they end up living together or will they just have a long distance relationship. |
| chrcln 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI just now got around to reading this & it was wonderful! Seriously, it was amazing! |
| trorygirl 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseGah... My brain has been turned into mush because was that not unbelievably hot? Unbelievably insanely hot? Answer: YES! This was fantastic! I loved every second of it! Humor, Romance, Smut and to top it all off a fluffy ending! Fantastic Work! --Amira |
| iamextraordinary 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abusei just want to tell you that this is the hardest review i've ever had to write. why? because it's damn hard for a puddle of goo to write out a review... yet here i am a puddle with a scary hole in the middle that's supposed to be a goofy smile. your writing this story has reduced me to a puddle of goo. it's... simply superb. every emotion in place, every tear-jerking, blood pressure-raising line blew me away... or rather, melted me into the aforementioned puddle. i am so suing you for ruining my jammies. they're all melted now. my demand: MORE STORIES OF THIS ILK! love this story, love yah for writing it. your affectionate puddle, Mikaela |
| gilmoreintraining 2007-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseare you going to have a second chapter where they get married or have a baby are you going to just make this a one shot i think you should write more |
| Spreeaholic1 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseaww. great story. i loved it! |
| Sam 2007-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was brilliant. I love all your RT fics and this is no exception. Well done :D |
| PyroDeScorpio2 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseaw! I love this little fic! I'm kinda sad it's over but I was happy to see Brad! And finally, Tristan gets some Rory lovin' in school! hehe... Good Job! |