Hurry up and update!
next chapter is Ed and al...
cool :)

YAYAYA!

loved your new chapter XD
Envy almost got his ** kicked...hahaha

update soon XD

I don't get it, this is fic is one of your best (second to The fox the sin and the metal blade) and hardly has any reviews, that sucks X(

I've never been a fan of Lust but for some strange reason, I'm starting to like the paring with kain (this is the only story i seem to like at the mo, with Lust having someone)

wow...
You really did do a long chapter XD
at least he and Wrath made up, who was the girl who killed Rage when he was a human?

WoW! a shinigami sin!
Ed going to be shocked when he finds out what a shinigami is, would the gate be classed as one?, since it dose the same job really, they can't find out yet though, since no one said anything to the 'good guys' about it :)

loved your lyrics, never heard of the song so I'll try it later XD
Kaien really acted like a big brother to Wrath XD

ta XD
Dose Dante know about him being shinigami? (was a shinigami an angel of death or god of death?)

Is he only going to be paired with Lust or other characters as well, like in your story 'the fox the sin and the metal blade'

well...

Can't wait for your next chapter, love his roll as big brother to wrath (I would hate being the person who harms wrath)

this is the best fanfic in the history of fanfics like when envy beat up Kaien that was so damn awesome

love your story!
um...he could have all his original powers...great speed and power over darkness (I though it would be good) so anything that is dark or a shadow from an object, hands like from the gate can grab his enemies...he's able to transport from shadow to shadow (darkness)...can also make darkness when needed.

(the hands like the gate I thought would scare his enemies...plus if he ever got captured in the gate or someone he cared about was, he can just transport in and out of there since there’s nothing but darkness inside)

to symbol he’s a shinigami...when someone looks at his reflection they can see black wings.
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Hehe can’t wait for your next chapter XD